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lyrabetes3939


Lover of Lyra

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Sky Scraper is a handsome blue pegasus pony with a sharp mind and a strong heart. He's also the architect behind some of Manehattan's newest buildings. Despite his impressive credentials, he's also an introvert who enjoys the solitude of being near the water. He lived and worked in the big cities for a while, but eventually he wanted a change of pace. He now lives at an elevated lake house just north of Ponyville.

After moving, Sky expected to spend most of his time alone as usual. But when he gains a new best friend in a surprising way, he decides to reach out and visit Ponyville proper for the first time. There, he meets the most beautiful mare he has ever seen in his life. Her name is Lyra Heartstrings.

If luck is on his side, he won't be alone for much longer.


Sky Scraper (c) me
Emerald Leaf (c) Mellow Mane

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 13 )

I love it so far. Keep up the good work 💖

10147322
Thank you, my friend! Glad you're enjoying it!

First time reviewing something! And for a friend no less!
I would recommend to avoid repeating words like lake, sometimes, when you are narrating, use a description instead:
The watery location.
And when the characters are talking use: it
Hope it is of use!

10147372
All right, I'll keep those in mind. I hope you're enjoying the story so far, my friend!

Flawless writing, you followed the rules. Nice! Must learn from your writing

"At the north end of ponyville, lies a large lake that resembles an ocean."
Practicing some editing on your work so when i work on mine itll be awesome and might help you. You dont need to edit yours, just throwing out some ideas.

10147666
Thank you! I'm glad you like my writing so much! I often worry that others won't like the stories that I share.

It doesn't matter about how much others like it. What matters is the amount of enjoyment that you get from writing it.

10147853
Well said, my friend! Well said!

This is awesome! Keep up the great work, my friend! I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter!

10148151
Thank you very much, my friend! I'm glad you're enjoying my story! Chapter 2 should be up within the next few days.

Can't wait for chapter 2

10149558
It'll be up here soon, don't worry! :raritywink:

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