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Applejackisbest


"In this life we are either kings or pawns, emperors or fools." - Napoleon Bonaparte

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Blazing fury is a normal pegasus. But there's a reason he has fury in his name. And why are his eyes blank, Why doesn't he talk about his past, where does he leave to every day? These are the questions his friend Luna has been asking.

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Comments ( 14 )

Ouch. So many mistakes and bad grammar.

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I know it's because this was just for fun and kinda rushed

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You can try using Grammarly for grammar problems
I use this my self and it's not bad

Browsing and found u. I’ll be watching

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I have edited it just a little. Nothing to fancy so don't get onto me about mistakes. Thank you for your feed back :twilightsmile:

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What you think about the small edits

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