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The Princesses of Equestria are a firm concept to Jimmy, for he has changed into most of them (one more than the others). One, however, has always eluded him.
Until now.
A story I wrote as a surprise for JimmyHook19. It is also the fourth and final part of the Princess Quartet, and my way of marking the end of an era.
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Now he has the thiccess plot
10143535
I beg your pardon?
Gee-Man, a Hazmat Suit!?
I've been going uptown just normally, keeping to staying clean, hand washing etc.
Though Hazmat Suits are cool... Just ask my friend Gordon, the suit makes him feel like a Free-man.
Anyway, I'm curious about the end?
Is that considered a Character Death?
Or is he just abundantly Celestia?
The Transformation was front and center.
Though it was a tad abrupt?
Overall cute TF, world needs more Sunbutt.
10143607
Mind wiping is a staple of this genre. It's more accurate to say that Jimmy's memories were temporarily supressed.
10143610
The closest I've come to "Mind Wiping" was Secret Invasion.
At that I'm Rewriting the whole thing, to not involve said wipe.
That, and to make my MC not a complete piece of trash.
To each their own, though since it's a One-Shot I can totally see how the wipe is beneficial.
If it were ongoing, I'd say keep like half Jimmy, with Sunbutt quirks.
That way a human tossed into the role of ruler, could be absolutely hilarious.
Again, nice story.
I enjoyed the TF detail.
Something I myself feel, I've never really focused on too much.
Need to condition myself, to break free of my comfort zones.
10143620
I wrote this as an effort to try and ramp up the amount of detail in my TF fics. I sometimes feel as though my writing is in decline.
10143624
I like it though
10143627
Aww, thank you.
10143707
Just setting things up for the next few months.
Sure thing. Just give me a moment.
10143711
I can't wait for Jimmy's reaction.
10143727
Surprises are fun indeed. What was your fave bit?
10143733
That's based on personal experience. I once saw somebody in a hazmat suit.
And they weren't police or military.
10143735
Overdoing it a bit?
10143800
At least panic buying has stopped where I am.
10143624
Hmm.
I hundred percent know that feeling, as if you're writing something you feel is just bare.
It'll pass, you just need that spark of imagination.
10143824
it's slowed down here.
I was actually able to get bread, but all cereal was absolutely gone.
Jimmy is now a goddess
10143918
Hey, thanks.
10143920
Crazy.
10143953
Celestia is not a deity, OK?
Excellent the entire way from beginning to end :3
Of course that's S1 Luna to the right of Celestia <3
10144018
Thanks. I'd ask what your favourite bit was, but I think we know what it was.
10144020
You're welcome. :3
Indeed X3
10144028
The TF, almost certainly.
10143965
she can raise the sun"
10144064
But has no supernatural power.
10144075
oh..yeah...i wonder how celestimmy is doing? (thats my name for her.. combineing jimmy and celestia)
10144098
Just say Sunbutt.
10144104
ok...hows sunbuut?
10144140
She seems OK.
10144172
*boops sunbutt*
10144217
Doth thou 'boop' casually?
10144230
/....yeah
10144305
Good heavens.
10144309
oh..wow
10144335
Why?
10144340..why did i boop? why does one boop?
10144343
You tell me.
Just out of curiosity, what is the point of this type of story?
10146221
The idea of these stories is to showcase a fairly mundane person becoming a fictional character. This was suggested by my friend JimmyHook19, who has made a career out of TF stories.
It's oddly hard to describe, I'll admit.