this story will be updated every week unless life gets in the way and resources of war is not dead its getting updated next week. this story is a game im gm'ing from the FoE system like resources of war and Fiauras Fallout Equestria Dead Tree.

Well this is a very good start and you really did capture a good amount of the view from how Silver is so good job.

I will say this: you did capture Chane's direct nature rather accurately. He knows what could happen, but that won't deter him!