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kamulec123


I'm just plain'o guy who like to write fanfics and stuff.

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What would happen, if Dad didn't open door for Celestia nad her pupils ?
Could he succed in "saving" Dashie from returning to Equestria ?

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VRsJlAJvOSM

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................................................................................... *Sniff* T-That was.... emotional.... Now, fix some of the grammar and spelling issues. xD

Aru

Thumb up. Sadly this is the end.... need more ;P

1128696
I used google translator.
It sucks, that's why there are so many mistakes here.
I'm Polish, anyway.

:fluttercry: I could definitely see this being an alternate ending. Reading this is in class trying not to get terry eyed. Hard :raritydespair:

I will push Twilight off that cliff. :flutterrage: Hopefully they meet up again.

EDIT: Oh, just re-read the ending. Stupid mane 6! Always messing everything up! :raritycry:

Dammit :fluttercry: I cant read anything related to MLD without crying :raritycry:

Dam... Fuck celestia.

1129011 I could fix them up for you, if you want....

1129011
Bloody good writing, and i'm glad to hear that you are polish.

It shows that the power of frindship extends beyond the english speaking world, and into other domains.

1133562
You could ?! :yay:
I can send you link to document on PM if you want !

1130948
No. He's to heavy...
BTW. you gave me and idea...

1134751 I'd be more than happy too, xD

I'm thinking of writing a fic where he shoots them with a 12 gauge.

:fluttercry: Well, that certainly ended it. But ending the story by ending Brian's life raises the question of what does RD do after watching her father plummet to his death? That's one of the things I've noticed about MLD, it is impossible to end it.

1140424
That's where my idea I written above + another one comes in

OH GOD NOOOOOOO rainbow dashs' dad NOOOOOOO:pinkiegasp::fluttercry::fluttercry::raritycry::raritycry:oh god. please NOOOOOOO

hell no!!!!!!!!! why the fuck that happeeeennnnnnnnneeeedd!?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?:raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof:

I think I crapped a little

I gotta admit this was a very depressing end. :fluttershysad:

1139477 Hey, I just read that one.

Twilight!You killed him!You have killed a human.:raritycry:

:applecry::pinkiesad2::fluttercry::fluttershyouch::fluttershbad::raritycry::raritydespair: wwwwwwhhhhhhhyyyyy no the feels r.i.p

THIS IS EVEN MORE SAD! :ajsleepy::fluttercry::raritycry:

Damn you Twilight.

Oh. Well, that was sadder than I expected. Nice story anyway.

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