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MuffinPonyPoser


Likes muffins and ponies and muffin ponies and pumpkin muffins!

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This story is a sequel to Terra


As Twilight is returning to a state of normalcy after her tussle with Tirek, she finds a law long past that references a third princess, one that isn't an alicorn. She rides to Canterlot to ask Celestia who this 'Terra Firma' was, and how she was related. There, she finds Discord and is sent away. There are many questions running through the minds of the main 6, like who that mysterious green and brown alicorn is, and why each member of the elements of harmony are acting bizarre.

I will warn that this can get a little introspective and dark, especially when the main 6 from Terra make their debuts. Each character will show their own signs of depression, anxiety, or both. and there will be serious trauma revealed later on. There will also be triumph, and remember that I'm still a novice writer. I'm open to criticism, and will do my best to fix any errors that slip through.

This is a slightly edited version of the future chapters from Terra, which is not finished. I will post more to Terra when I feel that more information about motives or other such things are needed.

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Remeber, I'm open to suggestions. Whether it be a background character you'd love to see or something I failed to explain adequately, I'm open!

*door creaks behind me, somewhat ominously

I found something I thought was funny today. It will have some relevance later on, but I wanted to share it to whomever reads my comments. It goes as follows: "A neurotic is a man who builds a castle in the air. A psychotic is the man who lives in it. A psychiatrist is the man who collects the rent." — Jerome Lawrence

I started cracking up near the end, and don't know who has or hasn't heard this before. But I found out today. So I must inflict this torment on all of you.

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Looks like it's almost time for my favorite thing in the world! A rewrite, mixed in with several new chapters! (No sarcasm there, I like polishing and reworking things) so thanks! I hope you feel amazing this fine fine week!

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