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Follow that Van!!!
Answer from (one of) the audience: yes, but she knows how bad an idea it is.
Also, two things I wouldn't mind seeing later on:
1. foot/paw stuff (as not sex-related the cover art is, those Gilda feets do (oddly, not erection based) things for me.)
2. CC just inserted in Gilda, some toy buzzing away at his prostate ((depends on how the character and author feel about that (can't rub yourself raw if there's no rubbing going on.))
Great chapter!
If they go to the museum, is Twilight going to be there?
Yes.
Nah, that's probably a bit much, crosses the already-established bounds. Maybe half-jokingly regrets not doing so in future dialogue, but actually going through with it would be way too far into "uncomfortable stalker fan" territory.
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here here!!
Happy day at teh beach. Still recovering, but in doing so, building up demands for excessive applications of stimulation? Sounds like trainign for Olympics. Years of training, few seconds of effort a month?
Between magical unicorns and shamanistic zebra and Naughty Dragons, Im sure CC can find several things for Gilda to be trained on, with Snowys help and Gabbys assistance? If Gabby is a Control, would a Science Unicorn get intrested in helping?
Nofalc four whap training system? After just exceeding previous limit, take at least three days with careful movement to recover, retain the increase? Just like training any other muscle, it takes repeated effort?
Interesting, to be sure. And to answer your query; no. The sheer number of characters is already making the story feel a little diluted. You add any more and they will all become interchangeable.
Should Gemma follow them home? Not right now. Later, sure! Friends that can show from time to time would be great. As for the suggestion to have Twi show up at the museum that was mentioned, I'd say go for that to add a vector for the wackier/more implausible things to happen. She doesn't need to be a primary character.
I'd also like to say that I like the way you seem to be setting up two more nascent couples. Then again, I've always been a sucker for character development.
As a Dungeon Master, I know that this small detail is actually significant...probably...maybe...
Ooooh, do I sense another Dorkness Rising fan!!!
And yay, cuddles!!!
I'm going to say yes, follow the van. Giraffes are great.
I'd say no, don't follow them home, too many characters could make the story bloated and diminish the impact each new character introduction has.
She could be a reoccuring character that shows up every once in a while but I don't feel like she should be a mainstay.
Taking the laptop to the beach... now that's risky
Many do
Today, Special guest Gemma the Giraffe, as Long Tongue Silver?
Nah, don't have her follow, show us more of the current characters, like Dash.
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Normally I wouldn’t agree, but it would be worth it for Twilight to join this group! If for nothing more than the Adorkableness that would bring, hell would even solve their Unicorn issues!
Wonder what she is doing in this Verse?
This was a mostly fun chapter.
Er hi but lol I think this from fic user would have a few strong words for you since they have a fic called meet the change gang and all the characters are adolescents I get different change gang but it's wise to just say different universe and characters
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Best beach day everrr~♡