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Is Spike a child or an 18 year old?

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Right now he's 17 years in this chapter. He will eventually be 18 and get his harem later on. 😚😏

I think they'll link Spike with the deaths.

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Oiu!!!!! Are they REALLY that Retarded, to think that SPIKE, of all people! Commit those murders. :facehoof: :facehoof: :twilightangry2:
I hope they lose their jobs, for being idiots, and false accusing a innocent hero like Spike.

Edit: I meant to the Police, and even the Power Ponies.

Spike was getting a few glares from males but also a few looks of pity at his state. He didn't answer and merely went to class.

What the F. Is there Problem with Spike????!!!!! :ajbemused: :twilightangry2:

The teacher began to teach the class as usual, with Spike writing his notes per usual. As he did, he noticed that a note had been handed over to him, as he saw it, it said "We're sorry.". Spike only gave a look of dismay and threw it away, with Rainbow only giving a look of sadness while Fluttershy only cried a few tears. The lesson continued as the class listened to the teacher and continued to work.

Spike DOESN'T want your apologizes, for being terrible Asshole friends. :twilightangry2: :facehoof:

The irked rainbow haired girl got up and pummeled the guy with a fist to the face and then a savage kick to his groin

"Anything else you wanna try shitstick?!" RD said

The guy only shaked his head and scurried away from her and the girls and the other boys followed as well.

HA!!!! That's what you get, you perv. Dumb assess!!!!!! πŸ˜‚ 😈

The three nodded and continued to eat their lunch together, with Twilight and her friends left shocked that the Spike has not only befriended two other males, but that he appeared to actually be having more fun with them then he had with themselves. Before the girls could get up and confront the 3, the bell had rang, meaning lunch was now over.

What the Heck are you'll doing!!! Don't bother Spike and the Predators, just Because you'll jealous!!!

The first was a girl that appeared to be an young child, but she was wearing a prissy little dress and her at blue locked and curly hair similar to Darla Dimple. This was Cozy Glow

The second was a large muscular man that had a nice piercing and a white beard, he also had reddish skin and black clothing and silver shoes. He was Tirek

The last was a beautiful yet evil looking woman with black skin, dark blue hair, green insect like ckithjng and boots and evil gleaming green eyes. She was known as Chrysalis

"The legion of Doom!" Spike said in horror

SERIOUSLY!!!! I get it, with Tirek and Chrysalis. But, with Cozy in the Villain business???!!! She is JUST going to get hurt!!

The lights were back on, and the 3 villains were found on the ceiling flayed, with Tirek's head and Chrysalis's head ripped out. And Cozy's body was not only decapitated, but also personally defaced.

:twilightoops: :rainbowderp: NEVERMIND!!!!!! There'll dead!!!! So, a least they won't be a problem to the heroes, and citizens, am I right. πŸ‘ πŸ‘Œ :twilightsmile: :rainbowlaugh:

Spike had woken up and saw he was covered in blood befire suddenly being knocked out by a hit on the head, before falling, he could've sworn he saw the same yellow eyes from the previous day before losing consciousness.

God Damnnit!!!!! This again???!!!! Why does Spike keeps getting FRICKIN Blood on him??? To make it like HE done the murders himself!!!! 🀦🀦🀦🀦

Spike was slowly beginning to wake up from his slumber and slowly began to open his eyes, he saw he was inside some sort of medical room. He attempted to move, but he was restrained. He looked and saw his arms and legs were both strapped onto the table and he was trapped. He looked around and saw the dark fog around the room and heard a door open.

Damn it!!! If it's the Cops!!!!!!!! :flutterrage: :flutterrage:

The person, or in this case alien, was the leader, the GreyBack Predator along with a few other brethren of his own

Spike was now completely horrified, once he was back on his planet hiding from the Legion of Doom, then at once he was now strapped to a table surrounded by aliens.

😐 😯 Okay, Nevermind. The Predators have him, thank god. But, I hope they go easy on him. :twilightoops:

"Hey, watch it!" Spike said, as one female felt his crotch

The female growled at him in his face, then continued when he backed off as she continued to examine him while the males examined his chest and face.

Of COURSE!!! There's a female Predator that "May/May Not" have a thing with Spike. But, probably Yes! :duck: :moustache: Plus, be CAREFUL Spike. Female Predators MAY be Rare in action, but they are equally DEADLY like their Male counterparts. :twilightoops: :pinkiecrazy: :applejackconfused:

Spike was baffled, one moment he believed he was dreaming, then he was now being asked to kill someone not of this world."

"He has done so many bad things, he needs to be put to an end."

"Kill, wait I can't kill him."

"Why?" Jungle asked confused

"Because that's wrong and it would make me more worse then him."

"No it wouldn't" City replied

I agree with City Predator. That Superhero Moral stand point is really F******* BULLSHIT and STUPID!!!! Even through I like Batman and Superman. I don't like their "No Killing" rule to very nasty Un-Redeemed Criminals and Villains. I mean, HOW can you BE WORSE than the Villain that killed over Thousands to Millions of innocent people???????!!!!!!!!

That, if you finally kill him, you save a LOT of lives for it???!!!!!! Are a lot of super Heroes and Cops in the Comics, Shows, and Movies are that Stupid, or ignorant to see the big picture of the Grey Mortal stand point here!!!!!????? 🀦🀦🀦🀦🀦🀦 😀😀😀😀 πŸ˜’πŸ˜’ That's why I'm more into the Anti Heroes that killed REALLY Evil Villains, and Criminals. And still save Citizens.

I mean, even Cops, SWATS, Marines, and Soldiers in the Real world kill Bad guys and terrorists, and THEY DIDN'T get in trouble for it!!!!! Of course, Hurting and Killing Innocent Citizens in the cross fire is VERY Bad and Terrible!! πŸ˜₯ 😳 But, to Bad Soldiers, and Terrorists: Well, Fire away!!!! :yay: :pinkiecrazy:

"What kind of bad things?"

The boy was left petrified and shocked at the massive amounts of deaths and atrocities these criminals had done.

NOW, you see why that killing the Bad Blood, WILL make you a BETTER Man. Because you Permanently stopped the killer, from doing more Bad Things like THAT!!!!!

"Do you understand now?"

"What do I have to do?" Spike said, now fueled with determination and ready

"Lets do this." Spike said, ready to begin the hunt

Finally, you went though his head. πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ˜‰ Now, let's kill some Bad Guys!!!!!!!! :pinkiecrazy: :pinkiecrazy: :pinkiecrazy:

"Plus in the mall it couldn't have been Spike, he was hiding, I saw him inside the arcade room." Radiance notified

Matterhorn was still looking on the screen and said "Plus I don't think Hum-Drum- I mean Spike could handle it if he were to skin nor rip somebody's head."

Mare-velous said "True, plus even if he were to, I think we would know."

"I've been looking at the areas and I found another kind of clue that may show Spike may not be our culprit."

SEE!!!! This is LOGICAL hints, that SPIKE DIDN'T DO IT!!!!!! If you are all his REAL friends. You should have protect and believe him 120%!!!!!!!

Matterhorn pressed a few buttons and zoomed on the leader being decapitated while Hum-Drum was near and coated in his blood. She played the video in slow motion and the same yellow flashes came from an invisible figure, which the girls all saw and Matterhorn pressed a few buttons, revealing the invisible figure to be to her shock, a tall humanoid like person wearing a mask.

"What the hell is that?" Zapp said in shock

"That looks nothing like a human." Filli-Second commented

"I looked through the records on him, there's nothing." Matterhorn said

Maybe, because HE is a Alien! Duh!!!! Seriously Twilight/Matterhorn, you are in the Superhero business, there WILL be some Aliens later on. I THOUGHT YOU ARE THE SMART ONE HERE!!! :facehoof: πŸ˜‘

KO awesome story, looking great so far and I hope the Power Ponies will catch the real culprit soon to clear Spike’s name as Twilight found an important clue with the video footage. Also can’t wait to see how Spike will get himself a harem. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2:

The two were suddenly impaled at the same time by a cloaked Spike and Jungle while City was on lookout. As they continued, they saw the villainess was ready to begin her plan, Spike said to his two comrades.

Spike saw the distracted villainess and shot his Speargun right at her. The flying projectile then instantly blew a hole through the shocked villain's chest and she fell on the ground. The former sidekick then went to her corpse and took her head off with his wrist-blade and removed the skin and put the now clean skull on his holster.

Well. That WAS QUICK for him to accept for killing them. But, I not complaining, at least you don't have to DEAL with the Hair style Joker wannabe any more. πŸ‘ πŸ‘

"Wait...Do you think this culprit of ours may be an vigilante?" Matterhorn asked

"Think about it. The villains of the city are the victims plus any innocents weren't hurt and we weren't the targets either."

"She raises a good point, but how are we going to be able to catch them?" Filli-second asked

Pinkie, stop being stupid and just accept the fact, they are HELPING doing all your jobs. Way easily, I mind you. You should THANK the Anti Heroes for ending the Bad Villains for you, Permanently!!!!! Then again, you'll probably out of the job, ssoooooooo. 🀷

Matterhorn only smiled and huddled with the girls and brought Flash in too, unknowingly pressing her breasts into his right cheek and Filli-Second's on his left .

Flash blushed and said in his thoughts " Don't be a perv!

Flash, STOP being a Coward, or a P****, just enjoy it. Plus, there probably doing to you ON PURPOSE!!!!! Anime style.

Hunter parkoured to another roof and looked in an alleyway. He saw 3 familiar figures being harassed by 8 males in black suits

The purple pigtails haired girl tried to fight them, but was overwhelmed and one held her back while the one in front of her licked her face.

The yellow poofy haired girl with a spikey headband was pushed on the wall and the thug was trying to pull her pants down showing her humongous ass. He pulled down his pants and showed his raging excitement.

Hunter was enraged and activated his cloak and Wrist-blades. He jumped and impaled 2 of the thugs, decapitated the other 2 and impaled the one holding the pig tail girl and shot his speargun at the other 3, blowing them away into nothing but corpses with holes.

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Thank God, that Spike Killed those Rapists, and saved the Dazzlings!!!!

Hunter was left amazed at the 3 not because of their beauty, but in this case cause as Spike he knew them from school and they were the 3 girls with the beautiful voices that were often flirted with by other guys, but they rejected them cause they only wanted a piece of them and both for them as a person.

They probably accept men, that are nice, like their personality, NOT just their bodies. And for Spike, saving them from nasty rapist.

Hunter pulled out 2 100 dollar bills and handed them to the girls.

That's nice for him to do that. BUT, HOW did he get SO MUCH Money!!!!!

Hunter turned to leave and before he did, he turned and saw Adagio walking inside the building turn to him with a seductive smile and slap her humongous booty, causing it to jiggle and ripple and blew an air kiss to him, which Hunter caught and he left to go to his hideout.

*Looks at Spike* : Yeah heh BOY!!!!!!!! 😎😎😎😏😏😏 :moustache: :moustache: :moustache: :trollestia: :raritystarry: :duck:

You can keep the pictures. Besides, this is a rated Mature, and has the Sex tag story. So, your good. :moustache:

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KO so, you don’t like heroes who won’t kill no matter what? I can relate that Batman doesn’t kill villains because he wants to honor his parents and other good people, not destroying in their name.

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Sorry that I didn't specifically make my claim. But, what I trying to say is I DON'T really hate Heroes that don't kill. I NOT saying they should be merciful, or go on a killing spree on there enemies. I just hate that the Heroes are sparing Villains that DON'T deserve Mercy, or Jail time. Batman can use the No Kill code, on just petty criminals, and Super Villains that HAVE some Redemption quality, IF they just try to change their ways. :facehoof: πŸ˜‘
(Except Rapists, and Child abuse or molesters, because there really f***** up. And deserve Torture and Death for it!!!!!!!!!)

Take people like the Joker, Darksied, Thanos, Dio, Frieza, Cell, Goku Black/ Zamasu, and other famous Irredeemable villains. They did very mess up things, and killed ALOT of people.

Like Joker, Batman keeps beating him and put him in prison. But, Joker always got out, and kill more people later on. Joker even hurt and tortured Jason Todd, Barbara Gorden, and other Batman's friends. joker even caused Superman himself to go tyrant insane in the Injustice Series as well.

I mean, after all of that f***** Up stuff that Joker has done. I shocked and Pissed Off that the Gotham Court, or America in general, DIDN'T have him the Death Sentence, hanged, or the Chair for it!!!!!!!!

What, I meant is for THOSE KIND of people needed to die, for the betterment for the World, the Solar System, the Galaxy, and the Entire FRICKIN Universe!!!!!! :yay: :scootangel:

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P.S, I not trying to be rude, but you keep saying KO on all your comments??!! Is that KnockOut, or something else??????? :rainbowhuh: :rainbowderp:

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KO I can understand where you’re going with this but sometimes I think the heroes are sparing the villains like the Joker is because there are fates far worse than death and that death would be the easy way out for them.

And don’t worry, I don’t mind. I got it from playing video games and I ended up doing it on my comment and text messages. You could say it’s my catchphrase.

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I like the catchphrase, just a bit confused on it. I'm a fan on your stories too.

And the Fates far WORSE Than Death thing. I don't know, it's just that Imprisonment, even in the most heavy ones, like the Negative Zone, or a Super Powered Prison. They still escaped and do evil stuff. I think finally ending them, and make them Rot in Hell is a good Punishment. The only thing that's worse than death is the Black Lanterns, Anti Monitor, enslaved by Darkseid, or the Soul Stone from Thanos, and Soul Powered Anti Heroes like Ghost Rider, or Spawn.

P.S. At least in this ONE, the Two Predator Bros. and Spike Killed most of the Super Villains. They just Have to go after the Bad Bloods.

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KO cool, hope to see your comments on some of my stories. I also hope the Power Ponies will meet the brothers reading the horror reaction once they learn of the brothers’ mission, and maybe join Spike’s harem too.

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Yes, they be horrified, at FIRST. But, the Predator Bros. are doing a good cause by killing the Super Villains for them, and getting the Bad Bloods as well. I mean, are they gonna be THAT Stupid to take on the Predators, with very good and brutal hand to hand combat, advanced technology Weaponry. And Spike, that knew all of their Weaknesses. Over helping them STOP the Real threat, the Bad Bloods????!!!!!

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KO yeah, the fight will happen first then talking later. Do you think Flash and Twilight will get together in this story, consider he tries his best to be a gentleman with the heroines.

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I BET that the Predator Bros. And Spike win. As for Flash. 🀷🀷🀷🀷🀷🀷🀷 Unless, Spike forgive Twilight and Take her!! :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowwild:

* Spike que Trey Songz - Mr. Steal Your Girl [Official Audio]* : 😎😎😎😎😎😎 :moustache: :moustache: :moustache: :moustache: :moustache: :moustache: :moustache: :moustache: :moustache: :moustache: :moustache:

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KO I’m good with either way, can’t wait to read more chapters!

KO awesome chapter, the Power Ponies have discovered the aliens being the murder though the Bad-Blood did the self-destruction thing blowing himself up and trying to take the heroes with him. I hope they’re okay and tell Spike about, even though he already knows. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2:

What's Predator, and how is it related to anti-heroes?

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........ πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘ You DON'T know what the Predator series is??????!!!!!!!! I apologize, but I'm NOT trying to insult your intelligence. And I know not everyone knows every franchise.

But, to help you, the Predator is a Sci fi/ Horror classic that starts in 1987, with Arnold Schwarzenegger, and Carl Weathers from Star Wars, in the Cast. The Predators or there Real Species name: The Yautja are alien Honor Bound Hunters, with Advanced technology Weapons. And for what they do, they go to planets to hunt and kill Dangerous alien species for Sport, and having the skulls as Trophies. Even HUMANS!!!!!!!! The series even got multiple Movies, Comic Books, Video Games, Toys, and even a Crossover with the Alien/Xenomorph Series as well.

As for the Anti Hero thing. This is a Superhero crossover with MLP. And the Predator Species, are MOSTLY a Anti Hero type of Warriors.

KO awesome chapter, sheesh I know Spike is made at them but he didn’t have to punch Twilight in the cheek as she and the girls just wanted to be friends with him again, though I think they’ll be a little heartbroken once they learn the truth. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2:

KO awesome chapter, Adagio had Spike do a little errand to keep his secret identity (and got a good view of Applejack’s sexy butt) and got rewarded by Adagio officially his girlfriend! Oh, the Power Ponies are going to be super shock about this. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2:

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Made? "Mad"

I'm a bit shocked too for him to do that. But, considered how Spike was treated. Twilight DESERVED that "Wake Up Call" of a Punch right there. :flutterrage: :ajsmug:

😭😭😭😭😭😭

KO awesome chapter, wow Spike sure had a lot on his chest of all the anger and pain he’s been keeping in for years until now. And it looks like the Power Ponies are gonna plan something big for Spike’s birthday though not sure if it’s gonna go well. Let’s hope for the best. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2:

This is gonna be good!

(Small typo right at the end)

KO awesome chapter, damn the fight was pretty good and now the Power Ponies are shocked to see Spike as the vigilante making their effort to earn his trust back more difficult. Hopefully this doesn’t get too intense and bloody. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2:

KO awesome chapter, damn Twilight and the girls sure got a beating from Spike, but at least he got to see how sorry Twilight was and hopefully things will work out between them. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2:

SPKKE IS VERY ASSHOLE!!!!

Found this fic thanks to a friend showing it to me.
Pretty interested in it with Spike being a badass, the girls getting facing the consequences for all the crap Spike went through and about Spike getting a harem.
Though really bummed that Chrysalis appeared only to be killed off like that..
But yeah, I am liking this story.
I wonder who else might be in Spike's harem?

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Well I'm sorry dude, but he is not. To be fair, he was ignored, and mistreated by the CHS students and the RAINBOOMS included, for No Damn reason!!!??? Besides jealousy or being to Prideful having Super Powers, and Spike doesn't????? That's really petty and total Assholes for them to do that to Spike. Plus, Spike said so himself, how he was Mistreated or ignored in Chapter 8. (With reference to The Fresh Prince of Bel Air). :twilightsmile:

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so far his conduct is not improving, using this aggressiveness as a means, he would not be better than the villains and bad blood (since the hunting code is not obeyed) the mentor should see this action as a child's anger and not a hunter, the reason was also unclear and his change was shallow, so it will be difficult for the girls to forgive him now. if the author does it like apologizing to his attacker after he hits you in the face. In this story Spike seems more of a villain than an anti-hero.

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We shall see in the next chapters. But, Spike is BETTER than the Villains or the Bad Bloods, because of one thing. HE DOESN'T Attack or Kill Innocent Civilians. And sure, he kicked the Power Ponies dumb asses REAL hard!!!!! BUT, their NOT DEAD!!!!! :ajsmug: :unsuresweetie:

I think the girls are legit going to kill him when they find out about the Dazzlings...

KO awesome chapter, glad to see that Twilight and her friends are going to be okay and Spike got to enjoy his fun time with the Dazzlings finally becoming a man! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2:

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OH HELL NO THEIR NOT!!!!! Besides, Spike can just kick their dumb asses once again, but with the help of his Predator Brothers. Plus, he's not into them anymore, Since he still Hate them for mistreating him. And he already got the Dazzlings for himself. :rainbowwild: :heart:

P.S. THEY CAN'T KILL, because their Heroes. And their rather go and burn in hell itself for their Sins, than hurting "their" Spike.

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Fuck the girls they deserve it

Make this story longer
Please 😍😍😍🀣🀣😯😯😎😎😎 what happen that spike gets a harem

KO awesome chapter, Spike may not like saving the Power Ponies but he can’t ignore the fact that they were good friends to him and shared some good memories with them too. Hopefully saving them will be the start of reconnecting their friendship, even if it’s just a little. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2:

Spike is ASSHOLE!!!!

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Oh!!! :ajbemused: Will you PLEASE Stop, okay. We get it!!!!! But I'm still on Spike's side. Plus, take it in Spike's shoes. He is mistreated at school by very jealous and stupid Male Students. The Rainbooms/ Power Ponies DIDN'T even treat him right either.

So, what if it that would happen to you one day??? I be REALLY PISSED too if it were to happened to ME, with the Betrayal and Mistreatment.


Besides:

Spike nodded and got ready for the hunt, and save his former allies.

"I can't believe I'm doing this." Spike said with dismay

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He is gonna SAVE them anyway from the Bad Blood Predator. So, maybe Spike MIGHT give them a chance. BUT, they have to EARN his Forgiveness and Trust.

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continue asshole Spike, kkkkkkkkk

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Oooooohhhhhhhh!!!!!!!I :facehoof: :facehoof: :facehoof:
Plus, when you Keep saying "Continue Asshole Spike". That DOESN'T make any sense!!!!! You could have said "I'm Continuing to say Spike is a Asshole, or "Spike is Still a Asshole".

And I DON'T CARE He is a Asshole!!!!! The Girls deserve it anyway. And Vigilante Heroes or Anti Heroes in Shows, Movies, and Video Games: like Batman, Red Hood, Deadpool, The Punisher, Ghost Rider, Dante, Kratos, etc. DO have some Asshole moments. BUT, their still Badass Heroes and Anti Heroes in their own rights. And Spike is Cool, and DESERVE to be a Goddamn Hero ( Anti Hero Type.)

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