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Words are hard.

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Sweetie Belle has it all. Money, fame, fans, brand deals and pretty much anything else one could want. But, even with everything she has there is one thing or rather a pony that is missing from her life and it's tearing her apart. She thought that all of her big dreams and fame would make her forget about the daring orange pegasus that she once loved. But she just feels like a loser without her.

This story was inspired by the song Loser of the year by Simple Plan.

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Comments ( 2 )

That was a little fast, too much stuff happening for 2k words. And the lack of punctuation marks makes this story kinda hard to read. Maybe get an editor for that? Even MS Word spell check can fix most of it.
Other than that, a good ship. Keep going!

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Thank you, friend.

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