Before reading: Hmm... another FO:E story... meh. About a changeling? Interesting... has received positive veiws from people? Okay... I'll bite. In other news, your profile pic shares a resemblance with my laptops background image.
1126996 I'm glad you enjoyed the beginning, it was rather fun to write. If you do find a mistake feel free to point it out, the only editor my story has is me and I've been known to miss things. Congrats on being the first in two categories!
1127107 Glad you gave my story a chance, I hope that I was able to convince you to give it a shot and that you enjoyed it. New Lunar Republic for life!
1210205 Hmm, not sure if I'm going to have her run into anymore Changelings, or if she'll have a pipbuck though she most likely will just have to think of a way for her to find one. As for guns? Well, she's not going to use them. Changelings always struck me as being more hoof to hoof fighters and very good ones at that seeing as how they conquered Canterlot City with no problem. And my story needs more chapters! The next one should be up shortly!
A very good beginning. A few mistakes here and there, but not much major.
I'll be following this.
Edit: You know, it's rather satisfying to be, not only the first to comment on, but also the first to read a story.
Before reading: Hmm... another FO:E story... meh. About a changeling? Interesting... has received positive veiws from people? Okay... I'll bite.
In other news, your profile pic shares a resemblance with my laptops background image.
needs more, more surviving changlings, more pipbucks, more guns, welll at least for me that is.
1126996
I'm glad you enjoyed the beginning, it was rather fun to write. If you do find a mistake feel free to point it out, the only editor my story has is me and I've been known to miss things. Congrats on being the first in two categories!
1127107
Glad you gave my story a chance, I hope that I was able to convince you to give it a shot and that you enjoyed it.
New Lunar Republic for life!
1210205
Hmm, not sure if I'm going to have her run into anymore Changelings, or if she'll have a pipbuck though she most likely will just have to think of a way for her to find one. As for guns? Well, she's not going to use them. Changelings always struck me as being more hoof to hoof fighters and very good ones at that seeing as how they conquered Canterlot City with no problem. And my story needs more chapters! The next one should be up shortly!
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I'd be willing to edit for you.
I... think this is a good idea. usually i stay the hell away from FOE SS, but i like this.