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keithsterling


I started writing went I started college, I continued writing then.

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A series of murders grips the ponies' population in the City of Canterlot so far; the serial killer has targeted only modified ponies. The favorite target of this killer has been a pony that has been modified to look like Alicorns. A not so rare modification in this city since the disappearing of Princess Celestia and Princess Luna Silverlight. Now with two missing Princess's back, that unusual modification has tapered back quite a bit, but still their many targets for the killer to find in the home city of the Royal Family.

Investigating these murders falls to Royal Investigator Alysia Ara Silverlight, the granddaughter of Princess Celestia Silverlight. So far, these attacks have not touched the Royal Family in any way. But that all changed went the immortal Princess Celestia was attacking from behind by the serial killer, which divert from his previous pattern. Everyone in Equestria knows that Princess Celestia Silverlight is pure Alicorn mare and has never been a modified pony. So why did the killer attack her from behind? Did the killer mistake her for someone else?

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Alysia Ara Silverlight, the granddaughter of Princess Celestia Silverlight.

Celestia is at least a thousand years old. Shouldn't there be more greats added on?

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Very true Starlight Nova but in this altered Universe princess Alysia Ara Silverlight is the Daughter of Grand prince of the moon Somnus Silverlight. One of Princess Celestia Silverlight Royal foals. So technically Alysia is Celestia first Grandchild and Princess Celestia disappears nine year ago. Then return to first meet her granddaughter.

Hmm the plot thickens.

Loving it
Angeletta Ribbon intrigues me

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I thought it would Angeletta Ribbon is one of those characters that I keep as fill-in character.
She really has no background to speak of, but she can take on any role in my story.
She is one of many characters I have in my bag of tricks of Characters.
On my list she is just generic character that I can build a character off of.

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Ahh that is good
Just her description caught my attention
Feels like she would be good for fun.

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