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Enza Ren


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Winter Break has come to Canterlot High. But Sunset Shimmer has no one to spend it with as her friends are otherwise occupied. Rather than spend the week alone she decides to travel to Equestria to enjoy Hearth's Warming with her friend Twilight Sparkle.

After the craziness of the Battle of the Bands and the general stress of the holidays, Sunset's looking forward to the peace and quiet of Equestria, where ponies never have to worry about wacky hijinks or impending magical catastrophes.

At least, that's how Sunset remembers it.

Chapters (3)
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Comments ( 24 )

This is great. I love the dynamic you have with Luna and Sunset here, Sunset’s such a tease and easily knows how to get on Luna’s last nerve :rainbowlaugh: i hope you do more with them two.

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Oh god, this is hilarious.

But...what's this thing Celestia and Luna need to resolve?

Oh lord, is this Anon-a-miss?

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Glad you liked it. Luna's a really fun character to write, there'll be plenty of her down the line. :raritywink:

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You have no idea how happy I am to hear the humor lands well. Sometimes when you're editing and doing rewrites and rereads you can start to doubt if it'll be funny to the reader or not. :raritystarry:

But as for Anon-A-Miss, I have no idea what you could be talking about. :moustache: This is a story about Hearth's Warming. :trollestia:

Okay, so this is set post Friendship Games at least, with Twilight mentioning Starlight. All I have really for when it's set.

I still feel this is going to devolve into another story with a certain pile of horsehit comic that this fandom refuses to let die.

Because people are just that stupid apparently. I hope this doesn't.

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Actually I shifted the timeline just a smidge cause I liked Starlight's character and wanted to use her. It happens somewhere in season 6 on the fim side and between Rainbow Rocks and Friendship games on the EG side.

Worry not tho, this is a tale about Hearth's Warming and fun times. Also, it takes place almost exclusively in Equestria to set your mind at ease.

I hope you enjoy it :raritywink:

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That helps for sure. Not sold yet on the messing with the timeline, but I can change my mind. It doesn't hurt the story for sure.

Great chapter! Do you plan to have Celestia reunite with Sunset? I would love to see that, if Sunset is in Equestria for 12 days surely she’s going to bump into Celestia at some point, will it be unexpected and she freaks out?

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Thanks! I'm glad you like it! :raritystarry:

I've now got all the story beats mapped out and let's just say, despite the description, It's going to be a very eventful 12 days. :trollestia:

I must say, this is quite a good first story and I'm enjoying the character and interplay you've got going on here. Looking forward to seeing more of it.

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I look forward to it! I love stories like this and known Twilight, she would probably have plans for Sunset sorted and tires her best to keep Celestia away from her castle since Sunset doesn’t want to see her but also known Celestia she’ll get suspicious and show up anyway :rainbowderp: keep up the good work. Can’t wait to see more of this.

Comment posted by Enza Ren deleted Last Thursday

I appreciate the realistic plausibility you put into Spike's character development. It actually resolves some underlying issues from the show, and adds realism while still maintaining some of the humorous aspects regarding his development.

In other words, teenagers will be teenagers, be they human, dragon, or pony.

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Thanks, I'm really glad that scanned well.
To me, especially in later seasons, Spike often came off as too mature to simply be a baby dragon, but there are still times when he's too childish to be fully grown. So I felt an intermediate stage, mixed with some Twilight acknowledged uncertainty regarding how dragons develop, would help explain how he's able to play the maturity field so to speak.

I also enjoyed the idea of Twilight, as his guardian, having to continuously deal with dilemma of trying to work out when its appropriate to step in.

I can not help laughing whenever i see -that- joke..
Why do we even.....

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It has always been one of my favorites. :rainbowlaugh:

I'm glad it brought a smile to your day. Thank you for reading :twilightsmile:

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It's one of my favourites too. God, why does it work so well here...

Thank you for that.

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I think the type of humor that joke uses just fits perfectly in the mlp universe. :moustache:

Im glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading. :twilightsmile:

The refrances in this are really old emporars old Grove tv series and even mario 64 were two I noticed

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I was hoping someone would catch the Mario 64 one. You have excellent taste. :raritywink:

Thanks so much for reading. :yay:

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