That crazy Flash Sentry fangirl. Uh-huh, yeah, the one obsessed with SciFlash. Yup, that's me.
Twilight wakes up, hurt and confused after a mysterious magical attack. Flash Sentry is beside her. The creature she was fighting is nowhere to be seen. What in the world happened!?
(That's the best description I could come up with that didn't involve too many spoilers)
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Wow. Great story. I know it's kind of unlikely, but I'd love to see a sequel to this. One where Twilight breaks up with Timber and gets together with Flash, though not in the stupid out of nowhere break up I've seen in other stories. Anyway, great story. Can't wait to see more.
Woohoo! That's my boy!
Also, the art really adds to the story.
Also, the part where Flash held back from kissing Twilight felt like an oh so subtle attack on someone who didn't do that in one of my stories.
I really hope I get to see Onward soon, especially with Spring Break coming up. In case it wasn't obvious, I didn't catch the reference.
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Thank you! And while I don't promise anything, I won't rule out a sequel to this either. After all, we're yet to hear what Twilight thinks of Flash
10124859 You're gonna end up beating me to my goal of one day being called the best Flashlight Fanfic writer. Though it wouldn't be undeserved.
Glad you actually did something a lot of ship fics tend to avoid; acknowledge the fact that character is in relationship with someone else rather than shoving in a lazy, offscreen breakup. This story was rather charming, and I loved the pictures. I think you should have this just 'Equestria Girls' tagged rather a 'Human tag' since while they are technically humans, they don't look or appear different than their canon universe selves.
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Aw shucks, I could never take that title. I'm an illustrator, not a writer. Though I'm glad you like my few stories enough to think so highly of my writing.
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Alright, I removed the "Human" tag and just left the Equestria Girls one. Thanks for your feedback!
10124915 Wish I had your talents.
This was nice, but at the same time very sad.
This is like "Cheer You On" but better.
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About the holding back part: It totally wasn't my intention while I wrote it, but it works SUPER well
And about Onward: I'm sure now you'll think of me when the part I referred to shows up in the movie
Trust me, the reference really wasn't subtle.
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I did also get inspired by the official YouTube release
Great story! You’re art is so amazing! I also really liked how you stated the Obvious about Timber dating Twilight ,even though I really enjoy the fanfics where they harass Timber :D In my opinion, chapter 2 would go like this,Twilight breaks up with Timber (bEcAuSe He ChEaTeD oN hEr) And when she walks in in Timber and “someone” kissing, she gets sOoOooOOooo mad and angry she turns into Midnight Sparkle.( cuz of all the negative emotions. And den her friends try to get her back to normal and it doesn’t work, den Sunset tries to do that same thing she did in the friendship games, which also didn’t work. DeN Flash steps in and he goes into the same white dimension from the friendship games and confesses his love for her. Then two/Midnight starts to cry bc she’s never felt True love before.(the whole parents slam door in face thing from the magic of love)Then Flash kisses midnight (on prob cheek, bc who’s first kiss wants to be on a evil magical demon, no offense to Twi;) )
Then she turns back and realizes that her worst nightmare became a reality and starts to run away sobbing. Flash finds her later softly weeping and tries to reassure her that everything is going to be ok. At first, she doesn’t listen and tells him how she felt alone her whole life, but then Flash tells her she’s not alone anymore and fast forward a while, they start dating.Twlight transformers into Midnight every time she has to many negative emotions, but Flash and her friends help bring her back.Twilight knows that Flash will protect her no matter what happens.
WoAaaHhHHh Dis comment is so long it’s like a fanfic on its own! (It would make a great one too *Cough cough fanfic writers cough cough* Love u Ro994! :D
I was wondering if that was a reference. Glad to see I was right.
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I finally saw Onward. Yeah, the reference is super obvious now.