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MedicPonyTraumaLane


I love traveling, delicious food, reading (especially fanfictions) drawing and healing others~ "So Others May Live"

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Rainbow Dash is used to feeling her heart beat a mile a minute... while performing stunts with the Wonderbolts, or fighting any threats to Equestria with her friends. But as she flies over Ponyville heading to the castle of the lavender alicorn who stole her heart she's coming to realize that as long as they're together her heart may never stop pounding. Not that she's complaining.

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Comments ( 13 )

Aside from a few grammatical errors, you are off to a good start.

Not bad. A few spelling mistakes here and there, that I will probably point out when I am not on mobile, but nothing large enough to break my immersion in the story itself.

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Thank you so much I’m glad you enjoyed the story. :raritywink: and for the follow. I’ll try to fix the errors if I can find them it’s been a while since I’ve written anything :rainbowlaugh: but I appreciate the feedback

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Thank you so much I’m glad you enjoyed it! :twilightsmile:

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Cool thanks for giving my story a try, it’s been a long time since I’ve had to write so I appreciate the feedback. I’d be happy to know where I can improve to put out better stories and I hope you did enjoy it despite my misspelling :derpytongue2: :twilightsmile:

Cute and fluffy. :twilightsmile:

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Thank you much :twilightsmile: glad you enjoyed it

What a lovely scenary. They both enjoyed the time together. Great work!

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Thank you so much for commenting, I’m glad you enjoyed the story and the scenery :rainbowkiss:

It's fluff, but it's my favorite kind of fluff. Thanks for writing this, it was really cute!

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I’m happy you enjoyed this stories fluffy goodness thanks for taking the time to read and comment

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