"... okay, I have another plan!"
This story is a sequel to Mystery Of Everfree
Summertime is finally here in Canterlot, and the Dazzlings and friends are eager to have a great start for summer vacation! And to kick things off, they plan on going to the new entertainment location; Equestria-Land! And to their surprise it's being run by a strange but famous internet celebrity...
Another continuation of the Shattered-verse stories. Reading previous stories are not required to understand this current story.
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Looks like a solid enough start to me. Definitely gonna be interested to see where things go with *this* version of Vignette Valencia.
Nice continuation. I enjoyed seeing Rarity's interview with Vignette, and it looks like the end of this chapter gave us our setup for the magic getting loose in this story...
First off, great to see something with Aria and Flash again, as I do love those two as a pairing
Second, I think we have our antagonist picked out for this time around... freaking Click Bait.
And finally, seeing Princess Trixie show up was a real hoot. I get the feeling that there'll be lots of fun with her and Amethyst hanging out XD
Poor Adagio.
I may not have the same "issues" she has specifically, but I sympathize - I am *not* an uber fan of roller-coasters! XD
Sonata was really adorable in this chapter, and it was fun seeing her meet Vignette
This was a nice chapter. I enjoyed seeing more with the Princess, and the one interlude with Flash, Aria and Starry was just precious.
Then of course, that cliffhanger at the end... hoo boy, our antagonist is getting started, and I imagine they're gonna be on a roll in short order...
The friendship between Sonata and Vignette is so charming.
So, now we're entering the Shattered-verse's version of Rollercoaster of Friendship, eh?
Looking forward to see where this goes!
I'm liking this version of Vignette already!
I also like the moment when both Octavia and Vinyl were accepted for the job at the amusement park, as well as Rarity’s interview.
Figures that there's magic running loose in this version too, but whose phone was it that wasn't Vignette's?
Liking this chapter. Most of the main girls are together at Equestria Land. Aria and Flash hanging out with Flash's sister, Princess Trixie is visiting and hanging out with Amethyst!
Click Bait, eh? (Clever pun name by the way). Wonder if this person is going to cause trouble for our heroes?
The bit with Sonata at the beginning was cute, especially when she met and befriended Vignette!
It would seem that Click Bait is jealous of Vignette and didn't realize that the reason why Vignette is so popular was because how nice she was to other people.
And Click Bait also has magic! Oh dear!
And poor Adagio!
Great chapter! It's fun seeing more of Princess Trixie and Amethyst, and the scene with Aria, Flash, and Starry was so sweet!
And that cliffhanger with Click Bait! She had already gone too far!
Love the interactions between Sonata and Vignette. The friendship between the two are so sweet!
And that bit with Trixie (human) not being scared of the haunted house, much to her friends' disbelief.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Click Bait continues to prove herself worthy of a swift kick in the pants. (Though Rarity's freak-outs were hysterically funny. XD)
Aria and Flash are still a lovely couple. And Flash's little sister is adorable.
And speaking of adorable, Sonata bonding with Vignette is almost too sweet.
Jeez! Click Bait was not only an entitled jerk, she's also a crazy jerk too! And she just trapped Rarity!
It was also interesting to see her trapped in this AU instead of not getting trapped in the original special. So who's going to stop her now?
As usual, the bits with Aria, Flash, and his sister were sweet, as well as more bonding moments with Sonata and Vignette.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
I knew it was coming, but I still got a kick out of the moment where Rarity and company all realized that they were just in a room and not in some mirror dimension or what.
Sonata continues to remain adorable. Her relationship with Vignette (and her cluelessness about technology) is a highlight of this story.
As always, glad I read this, Four. ^_^
Once again, great chapter, Four! You never disappoint!
Grrr... that Click Bait!
She even trapped Vignette, her boss (well, ex-boss now) while acting high and mighty. She even tricked Sonata into believing that Vignette ditched her! 
Thankfully, Vignette managed to call her and Amy after she arrived in the white room with the others (and Rarity's reaction after finding out they're in the warehouse the whole time was pretty funny), and they're searching for their friends.
I hope Click Bait gets karma once the girls stopped her! ...if they can stop her!
Glad to have been able to help you see this story to the finish, Four. It was fun to watch the plot unfold, and particularly to see this spin on Vignette Valencia in particular.
Wow! What a conclusion!
What happened to the remote? Was it destroyed?
Anyway, the gang was able to escape and stopped Click Bait. And seeing Vignette giving Click Bait a verbal breakdown was very satisfying!
This has been a fun ride! Thank you for this awesome story!
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Crap, I noticed.
Fixed that section, now we have confirmation that the weapon is destroyed. Sorry, I should have noticed that before I wrote this
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It's no biggie! I'm just happy to help!
Click Bait.
The only way things could be worse for Equestria Land would be Flim & Flam working there.
Oh. Wait. That's right. THEY ARE!