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Comments ( 10 )

very nice, I enjoy twisted and dark story's. this story has big potential and look forward to see more. best regards, darkbroney666

:pinkiegasp: could be better, but it's not horrible, keep writing you are doing okay, maybe adding more to the chapters wordcounts would be nice.

Edit: Now that I look the chapters are at least 1,000 words long. I don't know the chapters just feel like they flew by when reading them.

I am really enjoying this keep up the great work cant wait for some more of this

This is a cool chapter cant wait for more keep up the story

good story.

Nice chapter.

In my opinion this chapter should not have ended like it ended. It's forest after all. But you do you, only time will tell how you utilize this twist.

Very nice chapter.

Very nice.

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