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Holy shit.
Holy shit.
I have no words. Each part of that story was incredible. The tattoo was inspired (ngl kinda wanna see if I can find someone who'd be willing to do art of that), the orgasm denial part of was on point, the use of the safeword and integration of SSC into the scene is always nice to see, and the ending... wow, just wow. I loved it from beginning to end, and I can't wait to see what you produce in the future.
Take all my approval!
That cover is rly cute. Added to read later for now. <3
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Eeee glad you enjoyed Mel, thank you so much for your patronage in this endeavor.
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Awww thank you very much.
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Senpai
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Dayum. This comment, plus the first few paragraphs, make me wish I could read the whole thing. I sure would if it were about Rarity denying Spike an orgasm. Unfortunately, this kind of exquisite femdom only ever seems to happen between women.
This is your official review from Dirty Little Secret's Dirty Little Contest!
Remember to vote in the contest's poll -- voting closes at midnight, June 6th.
And make sure to allow notifications from the contest group and/or follow Dirty Little Secret to get the full results and the awards show post on June 9th!
You can also check the current ranking, thanks to garatheauthor's unofficial ranking of the scores that have been publicized so far.
------ Review ------
Please keep in mind, I know I can be overly critical and negative at times. I can always find something to nitpick, even in the greatest works of literature ever written. Please don't take it personally!
-Nice to see them planning things out -- including a safe word -- ahead of time. A lot of stories out there skip over all this, and it makes them feel less realistic.
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what else should I try and indulge in tonight.-- needs a question mark.-
“Now what is a good punishment for someone like you.”-- often forgetting question marks-Neat trick with the illusory gentleman! That's really innovative.
-Great job of pacing and details.
------ Scores ------
To clarify what these scores mean, check my judging rubric.
Cloppability: 89/100
Allure: 87/100
Enticement: 90/100
Immersion: 97/100
Prose Quality: 89/100
Total Score: 452/500
The more specialized scores for individual prizes, as well as the results of the community poll, will be published when the full results are announced. If this story wins any awards, there will be another post in the story comments sometime after June 9th announcing that this story has won.
Thank you for participating, and thank you for contributing to Fimfic's collection of clop!
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Dang cucked by allure.
😔
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Still not bad at all though, and still in the top 10% of stories in this contest. ^.^
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i know, i know, twas a jest.
i am really glad you are enjoiyng my porn so far though.