pony-writer/pornographer looking for work. old stories undeleted. i'm sorry. Patreon here
This story is a sequel to Twilight Sparkle & the Idea Machine
The bits that creep into our sleep are pieces of another world. Sometimes they're more real than the world around us. If everypony in Equestria was having trouble sleeping, what would happen next?
A series of short stories/vignettes about the nature of fighting against your nightmares.
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It wasn't done to punish you, but because you left her no choice. I for one grow so weary of people constantly lauding Luna with praise over this
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i think you're right and on reflection i hate this chapter. am i allowed to rewrite it as i go?
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No no. Keep it as is. I don't have a problem with the story at all. More like this particular trope. Fuck woobie Luna
A whole anthology of weird and melancholy bits about horses being sad? I feel spoiled.
'Parp'
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i changed it pretty significantly since i couldn't not see how plainly moralizing and stupid it was after you pointed it out. i still sympathize w/ woona, but i tried to make it more ambiguous and less hitting the reader in the face with a fish. pls lemme know ur thoughts <3
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Honestly, I didn't mind it at all, and I do see Celestia as, at least in private, taking the blame.
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just wanted to say i appreciated your feedback, and i hope in the future when i tackle this particular topic i'll have a more all-encompassing viewpoint thanks to you. have a good day. :) <3