Sassaflash has a problem. When she wakes up she doesn't know what she's done the night before. Then other things come up that just fuel her questions even further. She's going to need some help.
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I'm glad to see another fanfic about Sassaflash. Remember when RainbowDoubleDash encouraged people to write about Sunshower Raindrops so she could get a tag? Should I try that for Sassaflash?
The cover gives away the plot twist, and you have a problem with punctuation. There are several sentences that are missing commas, and you end questions without a question mark twice.
Welcome back.
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I do remember something like that and I don't see anything wrong with trying to get other characters tags. Heck a couple of characters have tags that honestly I think only have a couple of stories attributed to them so if a fair amount use the character it might be possible.
As far as the cover art goes that was more of a time constraint and image availability issue. They didn't really have a whole lot of good images of Sassaflash, especially as far as screenshots went. I can't say I haven't played fast and loose in the past but I needed something quick at the time.
As far as the editing goes, I'll have to go back through it. The missing question mark on the two "asked so and so's" I have to admit is ignorance on my part. I just always thought that having the question mark and the words asked and the character name were overkill.
As far as other comma issues I handed the story off to someone that I knew and thought would do a good job at editing/looking it over. They said it was fine and spoke about it as if they'd read it. After I brought your comment up to them the answer I got was, "Well I didn't try and fix everything," but when I looked at it what they'd done was relatively minor on my rough draft So ... yeah ... looks like I have fixing to do eh?
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Thanks! I'm slow as ever!
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Problem is, I don't have enough influence to encourage people to write certain things.
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Well that just takes building something up and sometimes all it takes is a story here or there that get people interested. Never know. Besides, influence isn't static and you can grow it if you want.