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"If you asked me if I liked ponies, I would say "Never!"
I couldn't have known my life would change forever.
This is a poem of how I slowly caved in
But also the adventure all bronies partake in."

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Well... I can't say that I relate much with it. I'm quite open-minded. I didn't hate/made assumptions of the bronies: I knew that every 'community' has it's ups and downs.
But enough about me: This poem is simply awesome! :pinkiehappy:

Bravo! BRAVO! :raritystarry:

This captures the spirit of Christmas in one of the most beautiful ways.
I salute you!

This poem takes all my d'awww :pinkiesmile::pinkiesmile::pinkiesmile:

71022 Is it wrong for me to say that "all bronies" then? I'm just wondering if i need to change that. :applejackunsure:

70944 I just realized you just told my entire story with emoticons

Don't need to :twilightsmile:
I apologize, I can be kind of a pain in my comments.

But, returning to your story. I have to say that it is THE most beautiful thing I've ever heard!
I'm not an emotional person, but you almost brought me manly tears... you were the first and probably the only one.
Sincerely, I salute you. This is on top of my list as a favorite. :pinkiesad2:

Also: Pinkie Pie is best pony.

71114 Thank you so much. And agreed :pinkiehappy:

Best and longest Poem i have read ever.

Holy bejezus, I just wrote something like this a few days ago and you have a nice story here. I LOVE CHRISTMAS PONIES:rainbowlaugh:

71099 Is that good:pinkiehappy: or bad?:fluttershbad:


71216 I promise i didn't take your idea! I started this like 2 weeks ago. yea, it took a while. And i'm glad you like Christmas, i LOVE Christmas ;) :pinkiesmile:

When I saw poem had over five thousand words I was a bit skeptical,
but boy was I surprised by this awe inspiring spectical.

bad rhyme sorry, This does insight emotion though, Never read a better poem bro.

you sir. Are a sodding Genius that

71340 Whatcha talkin' 'bout. That rhyme was awesome! And thanks :twilightsmile:

71374 Thanky kindly

What brings tears to other eyes, just seems to make me sad. Although, this is one of the more touching I've read. You captured Pinkie so perfectly. It's hard to think that ANYONE would be able to top it :) I say, Good work sir, I tip my hat to you

>>Rattlehead I agree copletely :pinkiehappy:

71402 I'd bow, but you wouldn't be able to see it :pinkiehappy: Thanks

... This is... wow... This is just amazing.

This is what is meant by the phrase "literary genius".
There are not enough manly tears in the world for this brilliant, epic story.
Kudos, to you, you magnificent poet!

71448 Thanks :raritywink:
71475 Haha, i'm not a genius. A genius would have been able to make this in one night :derpytongue2: It took me at least two weeks to write this. like 4 hours a day.

Most awesome sir.:rainbowkiss:

Sorry, I'm allergic to concentrated amounts of excellence.

Please, kind sir, take ALL OF THE INTERNETS.

Honestly, this is one of the best things i've ever read. And i've read quite a bit in my short years. The fact that you could do this in rhyme and produce such an amazing story as well... I tip my hat, and bow down to you. If i could be half the writer you are, i would never need to improve.
I felt this brony's emotions, his sadness and loneliness, his suprise at Pinkie, his bravery at the hands of buillies. This has captured the true essence of friendship in itself, the entire brony craze, and the true spirit of christmas, all wrapped up in a neeat bow with a few ballons tired to it.

I cried, yes. One of the few fanfictions to allow me to do so. Thank you, whomever and wherever you are, for this true gift.

-The Librarian

71036 But... But you need that daw! :fluttercry:
71481 Thank you for reading :twilightsmile:
71497 I'd be lying if i said i didn't laugh at this comment. :pinkiehappy:
71534 Thank YOU fine fellow, for reading it :raritywink:


this was a great pleasure to read, you did a great job on thos poem, i wont say i cried man tears at the end, i cried tears rivaling that of the creation of the planet earth lol:fluttercry::pinkiesad2::applecry:

...wow, :heart: that is all.

No seriously though, that was amazing, and done as a poem to? Genius! It's a fully formed and understandable story with a good moral, and good character, and done in rhyme. That, good sire, is talent. Bravo, and please, accept ALL my internets and D'awws :pinkiesmile:

Ya did good Bro, real good.:eeyup:

over 5000 words...I almost didn't read it 'cause it was already 12:00 here when I started, but I have to say this is a really nice and well written story.
Look I'll be honest here, out of all the ponies, pinkie pie much be the one that SCARES me the most, but as stated earlier, you captured her very nature in this, and gave me chills in doing so. I'm not one to cry (:pinkiesad2: :raritydespair: :fluttercry:) but this did make me very cheerful and happy. Anyway really nice poem and keep up the great works!

I am so going to post this on facebook and share the happy tragic story that is My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic... Thank you for it :applecry::applejackconfused::raritycry::raritydespair::facehoof::fluttershbad::fluttercry:

I’m an Equestrian pony, born and raised.
Ponyville’s fields are where I’ve grazed.
This SO reminded me of fresh prince of bel-air :pinkiehappy:

Okay, you have 39 comments.

Now you have 40.

I'm stuck at 39 too, so I know that feel. :twilightsmile:

You do know this isn't the only ballad of pinkie pie.
The has been one for ages.
If you search on youtube, you'll find it.:twilightsheepish:

71708 :trollestia: <--- It's her fault
71713 Planet Earth's creation is moving indeed :derpytongue2:
71768 No please, keep your daws, you need those for the real show! :ajsmug:
71801 Thanks Man, and thanks for editing it. Couldn't have done it without ya
71807 Thanks bro. Now get some sleep :raritywink:
71817 Thank you for reading and sharing this story :twilightsmile:
71857 Haha, yeah now i think about it that's what it sounds like :rainbowkiss:
71898 :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:
72037 Thanks bro
72098 Huh really? ... Ok i searched it. That was little more twisted than mine was :twilightoops:

Nice fic.
I like the rhyming scheme, very reminiscent of the night before christmas.

This will likely stand as Pinkie Pie's "My Little Dashie".

72189 You think so? I actually haven't read "My Little Dashie," is it good?

I know but just it was a Cupcakes song. :rainbowkiss:

72200 yes it is you should read it

This is almost exactly how it was for me. Except I found out about bronies and became one on the same day. But I do get a lot of hate from my old friends who think it's gay. Oh well. They'll get theirs :pinkiecrazy:

72276 got it :raritywink:
72292 haha, don't do anything crazy

That's one way of getting someone to watch the show.

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