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An alternate ending to "Luna Eclipsed", where Luna connects with the citizens of Ponyville in a different way, and truly captures their hearts and emotions.
I personally hated Pinkie Pie for what she did to Luna, and I will NEVER forgive her for what she did. This seems like a better way for Pinkie to face what she did, as well for the ponies of Ponyville to truly see what Luna deeply desires in her heart. Truly touching if you ask me.
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(reads the description)
I... I... what?
(reads the story)
...did you write the description to a different story by accident?
Not what I was expecting at all. Liked it but very misleading.
1122999
Did he change the description or something?
Also, you called your own story ''truly touching' and I felt nothing -.-''
1123218 ...huh, he did. ...okay.
1123298
Kinda weird question, what was the old description? xD
You need to have someone read over your story and look for grammar errors, there were a few that jumped out.
1123310 Geeze, I don't remember much (bad memory). Apparently, some other pony was setting out to ruin Nightmare Night, so Pinkie Pie and Twilight became detectives again to solve the "mmmystery" (yes, that pun was used). ...notice how it had NOTHING to do with "Luna Eclipsed".
1123325
...wut
1123338 Honest to God, even though my memory is crud, THAT'S what the original description essentially said.
Um...okay, that was...interesting.
Really, what else can I say? Half of the fic was Luna singing "Poor Jack," while the other half was Applejack breaking character so you could vent your frustration with Pinkie in this episode. I didn't like her there either, but AJ wouldn't turn on her as viciously as she did. At most, she would give her a cold glare, a short lecture, and then tell her to apologize.
But other than that, it was fine.
1122999>>1123158>>1123218>>1123826
Oh boy. . .well I really blew it with this one, man!
First, I jinxed it with writing the wrong description, and then, well, I kinda made a "half" Pinkie-Bashing fic.
So, I'll tell ya what. First, why not smile and say: "Hey! Matthais123 just gave us an ARG (Alternate Reality Game) with this story! The previous description he changed was actually a clue to a special story he's planning on publishing for Halloween/Nightmare Night 2012! He's smart!"
And second, I am leaving it up to you, yes YOU!, to vote on whether or not I should delete this story from this site! Seriously, I was NOT happy with this story, and will gladly delete it if you so wish.
This is Matthais123 signing off!
1123826 I agree, it shouldhave been Twilight but otherwise this seems like a better ending to 'Luna Eclipsed' and let's hope in Season 3 if she gets an episode devoted to her and her sister they don't screw it up which if 'A Canterlot Wedding' was anything to go by they won't.
1125048
Damn why did I not realize. Well I will be watching you! 
1125048 A) ...heh, I like that idea.
B) I don't think this should be deleted.
dude did you even watch the episode? Pinkie said its fun to be scared she didnt do it to be mean she even said so herself she knew luna wasnt gonna eat anyone it was just a joke sure it was cruel but still there is no reason to bash her for being well her its your opinion dude but just saying
1125350
So, should I delete this story?
1125928
Its up to you.
Aargh! Quit with the author bashing! Okay, I admit, Matthais 123 said that this story was one he was not pleased with, but still! Love and tolerance people! Have we forgotten the fundamental principles of bronyism?
Sorry if this comment is a little rantish, but I've just had an absolutely terrible day.
I'm feeling better now.
This is Australia...
I Like it.
Well, I like the story. This is actually what I wish had happened too.
Though, the song threw me off at first, lol.
i wish somebody(pony) make pinkie apple pie alternate ending where pinkie pie are really applejack cousin
Pretty nice to read.
Yeah.. something bugged me on how things went in Luna Eclipse.
I guess due to the whole scare thing or something.
I guess one of the issues is how Pinkie Pie was pretty insensitive there, like her idea was "too soon" due to Luna is going through some serious issues.
Pinkie Pie should have freaking told Luna about her idea before pulling all of this. She should have explained to Luna first.
Ironic that miscommunication(or lack of) is a factor that caused Luna to suffer in this episode, with how Pinkie Pie neglected to explain to Luna about the idea before she did it.
One of the huge factors that led NMM to happen was due to Luna bottling everything up and not telling Celestia her problems while Celestia didn't pay attention/notice Luna's suffering in time.
Hell, Spike suffered through this too in the Owlisious episode. The whole mess in that episode most likely could have been freaking avoided if Twilight explained to Spike why she got the damn owl in the first place, the whole mess happened from Spike being afraid he was being replaced(and "inferior" to the owl). This is pretty eerly similar to Luna feeling inferior to Celestia and being in her shadow and the NMM mess happened.
1125350
The main issue is how Pinkie Pie neglected to explain to Luna BEFORE she did that.
It was pretty insensitive of her due to the issues Luna has there. The idea was "too soon" I say.
She should have at least told Luna about it before doing so.
Something didn't sit right with me in the episode there honestly.
The whole "its fun being scared" part I think is part of the issue there.
I still loved Luna Eclipse(due to how precious Princess Luna is) but even it has some flaws like episodes of any show usually do.
Imagine hating a character so much for making your precious waifu cry that you write two pinkie bashfics about it. Matthais the mouse in your icon would be disappointed in you for hating a character so much like this. Isn’t he supposed to be this all loving forgiving hero same with your god? You all preach to be all loving and forgiving yet you won’t love and forgive pinkie. You are a very sad individual you have to be if you can’t learn to love pinkie.
10516045
Everyone needs to be in on the joke after seeing the shit angry grandpa pulled it’s better people are in on it you don’t want to traumatize the person being pranked.
10546844
Especially in the case with what Luna was going through big time.
10546925
Exactly! The least they can do is talk about it. I hate it when characters don’t just talk instead they do dumb things.
10516045
I agree. Nobody likes being thought of as a monster and Luna had only recently come back from being an actual monster and here everyone including pinkie running away from her like she is going to eat them. If pinkie had talked with her before about nightmare night and how she could join in it would have been better.
1125350
Maybe she didn't mean to be mean but she still was hurting Luna and she could have easily avoided it by talking with her first.
10516039
Well spike never even got a thank you for your hard work and she overreacted to the damage book considering she should have expected this considering she lives in a library with a fire breathing dragon. She been asking for this to happen forever.
11052353
Twilight sure needs to be called out on that.