Love Fools

Intrigued by her brush with love, Sweetie Belle concocts a plan to find her a special someone. A plan that will need the help of Apple Bloom and Scootaloo.

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OnlyButtonMash

OnlyButtonMash #2 · Mar 4th, 2020 · 4 · 1 ·

Part 2!!

Jest

Jest #3 · Mar 4th, 2020 · 3 · 1 ·

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I'm glad you enjoyed it. The requester mentioned that they were interested in getting a sequel written at some point so it may be a possibility.

Blackraven

Blackraven #4 · Mar 14th, 2020 · 2 · ·

The unicorn’s frown deepened and she immediately stood up, noting that Pipsqueek didn't even seem to notice her movement. With a sigh, the filly grabbed her cotton candy and trotted away from the colt, slipping past the various other ponies that filled the stands. Clutching the last of her sugary treat tightly, the filly made it to the edge of the stands, and leaped off the side, landing easily but accidently losing her gripof her candy treat.

you make it sound like she landed but at the same time she didn't land which can be confusing

Blackraven

Blackraven #5 · Mar 14th, 2020 · 2 · ·

“I am taking Featherweight to the arcade and we are going to play my favorite game and if he doesn't like that then too bad.” Sweetie Belle announced.

wow she's pissed

Jest

Jest #6 · Mar 14th, 2020 · 3 · ·

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That sentance was meant to be backwards. Looks better now.

Blackraven

Blackraven #7 · Mar 14th, 2020 · 3 · 1 ·

lovely story

Blackraven

Blackraven #8 · Mar 15th, 2020 · 4 · 2 ·

seriously ,who's downvoting all these comments

Jest

Jest #9 · Mar 15th, 2020 · 3 · 2 ·

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Dunnu. Someone's angry I guess.

Blackraven

Blackraven #10 · Mar 15th, 2020 · 3 · 2 ·

no .there's some guy that is going through all the button mash fics and down voting them.

Jest

Jest #11 · Mar 15th, 2020 · 2 · 2 ·

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Really? Why? Maybe its Fic Demander. He came in here with some weird, douchey comment immediately after this story was posted.

Blackraven

Blackraven #12 · Mar 15th, 2020 · 2 · 2 ·

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does he have a picture of spike holding a pencil with an angry expression?

Jest

Jest #13 · Mar 15th, 2020 · 1 · 2 ·

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Yeah hes shown up in other stories of mine and always posted some angry rant about how he doesnt like how something was portrayed. It was getting kind of sad so I just blocked him so I wouldn't feel bad whenever I see another of his comments.

Blackraven

Blackraven #14 · Mar 15th, 2020 · 2 · 2 ·

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no ,hes just looking for an excuse to sh*t on button ,he said it .he hates button mash .he will not read a fic solely for the reason that button mash exist in that fic .so .it's not because you 'portrayed something wrong' ,he's just looking for an excuse to sh*t on button mash.

Jest