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I will hijack stories and make crap. Why? Because there are stories with dark endings, death, pain, misery. I will make such stories happy. I will save the characters from a cruel end.

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Chrysalis, Tirek and Cozy Glow are free from their prison of stone! But now Cozy Glow is British and insist on being called The Doctor or Mr. Clever. Cozy Glow has also become Chrysalis's log and is now an odd looking changeling. Even worse, Cyberman have made Cyberponies. Daleks have arrived. And it's up to the greatest villains of Equestia to defeat the greatest villains from the stars. While running from the cops. Oh, and there's two Cozy Glows.

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 34 )

A bit fast paced and you'll need to know Doctor Who lore, but other then that; a somewhat decent chapter.

the story idea does make me giggle

10108016
Wait, are you talking about the writer of this fan fiction or the ones of the latest Doctor Who episodes?

10126980
Don't worry, thing will get better.

10107736
Pretty sure that would be everypony's reaction lol

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Time travel is fun and scary~

10170293
Yes it is. BUT THAT MAKES IT ALL SO MUCH MORE FUN!!!!

10179518
Yes, they do. One, however, sounds extremely British.
Extremely British.

Loop Loop Loop Loop Loop Loop Loop Loop Loop Loop Loop Loop Fruit Loop

AHHH-AHHH-AHHHHHHH!!! THIS IS AWESOMENESS!!!!
MR. CLEVER!!
COZY GLOW AS A CHANGELING!!!
CHRYSALISSS!!!
TIREKKKKKK!!!!
(and now for the finishing touch)
A SCREAMING FANMARE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You might need to work on grammar a bit, I but really don't mind. As long as you've got our darling Mr. Clever I think the Cyberponies might actually spare you! And I love the concept!!
Look, Chrysalis!! Your log turned out to be special after all!!

This chapter was slightly confusing. Did the Doctor Think that Ms. Clever was the Master?

And I get that he wouldn't know who Amelia was, since he didn't experience that bit yet, but there's one little thing I don't quite get - why did Dr. Clever teleport him to Twilight's old castle, not somewhere else? Sorry, I'm a Hoovian, I have to obsess over every little detail, no matter the context.

Also, when he looked at the TARDIS console, it showed some faces... I don't really understand who they were. Past regenerations? Future regenerations? And COZY GLOW??
Oof, I don't get it. Care to elaborate?

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WELL!
Answer 1: Yes. Clever and Dr. both thought the other was the Master.

2: They are in Twilight's old castle already, no teleport. Just a quick Silence memory wipe. *They fell down the Canterlot Waterfall, down to Ponyville. The waterfall connects to a river that is near Twi's castle.

3: The faces, 10th with Time Turner face, then the 12th's face, then the 13th's *she's a gal* with Cozy Glow's face. It lines up the regeneration equivalents.

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'course you do! This story iS AMAZING

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You are welcome.
BE SURE TO LIKE/ THUMBS UP THE STORY!

Cozy teasing her ‘parents’ is adorable :rainbowlaugh:
Update plz!<3

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I am working on about ten stories at once. It will take a tad for update

10820813
I have planned the next 5 whole goddamn books at this point and I'm stuck one one chapter of Goddamn Writers block.

10821311
Need any help bouncing off ideas, even with the writing?

10821990
Making progress, sorry if the chapter sucks.

I'm always on the lookout for Doctor Who crossovers in which Time Turner is NOT the Doctor. There's a lot of originality here, and I have to give it to you for that. However, this one didn't really grab me. The characterizations are a bit off, especially The Doctor. To be fair, though, The Doctor is a difficult character to get right. I kinda wish it could grab me, though. The ideas are interesting.

YAY AN UPDATE!
Twilight! Oh no!

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EACH BLOODY REGENERATION HAS A DIFFERENT PERSONALITY MY DEAR GOOD SIR/MADAM

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I know. There's just something off about this one. It's hard to describe. I'm not very good at putting words to things like this.

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