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like most writers, you mainly need to work on keeping your tenses straight.
too much jumping between them. Also, somebody else to tell you when you are missing words.
Says incomplete. Not sure where else this could go, but I’m curious to see.
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Waiting to check reception before I change anything. I have an idea to make this an anthology of stories along this vein. But wanted to check and see how this first part did.
since the matter is up in the air, ill mention that i woudl like to see more of this, too