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Gingerquill


Let the dreaming commence!

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Nopony epitomises the stereotype of the privileged and self-entitled twit quite as well as Prince Blueblood. He is a selfish, indulgent, preening cretin of cosmic proportions.

Unfortunately for him, his ‘aunts’ have retired, and with their departure went his gravy train. Princess Twilight has ascended to the throne and set about tasking the Prince of Equestria with Royal Duties worthy of his position. An emissary of good will to the newly come of age Princess of the Zebra will be a good and simple start.

The palace staff are busy taking bets on how he manages to screw this up

My entry for the S10 Writing Competition.

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Comments ( 13 )

Where can one enter the S10 Writing Contest?? Equestria Daily??

Also, amazing story!

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Shrink Laureate is in charge of the contest, he made a post about it a bit back. Deadline for entries is the 1st March, but if you ask him nicely he might at least be able to help with the next one if not this one...

Also, thank you :pinkiehappy:

Blueblood actually DOING something? This I gotta read.

So, this is a 'Blueblood is a spoiled nincompoop'. I really hope this is a story that builds him up instead of constantly making him look worse and not learn a damn thing. I'll follow this for now.

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We don't talk about the Jock Strap incident...

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everypony deserves their moment in the sun :twilightsmile:

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You'll just have to read it :raritywink: for now, suffice to say I plan to follow the themes and tones of Friendship is Magic.

Well, at least we can be assured that the guards and staff are just as incompetent as Blueblood.

“Surely you remember the Jock Strap Incident?” Inkwell asked with a carefully neutral tone.

Ah... so Twilight is Freeza. That’s interesting...

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I mean, we have seen at least 4 different forms for her...

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Only in so far as it serves comedic purpose :pinkiehappy:

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Thought I'd give it a whirl, see if I can build on it, my homage to the greats :twilightsmile:

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Wonder how she'd look in gold... :raritystarry:

Any chance we'll see an update soon?

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Hmmm...
You know, I have left this far too long.
Consider this one resurrected :)

All right, this has been a rather amusing read so far, and I’ll make sure to keep tracking. Though I have to stay, there is quite a bunch of spelling and grammar errors (notably a lack of apostrophes in possessives, including the one in the title), some odd capitalisation here and there, inconsistent and sometimes incorrect use of commas, and many recurring issues in direct speech. I appreciate that not all people like to be corrected, so I won’t go into detail here, but if you wish, I can elaborate more in a PM, especially on the basics of direct speech.

I look forward to seeing this story updated.

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