• Published 25th Feb 2020
  • 2,747 Views, 85 Comments

In a Rut - I-A-M



Alphas do not mate with other alphas, and Sunset knows that. Unfortunately, a mishap between her and Rainbow Dash have put the two alphas in a complicated relationship.

Comments ( 20 )

Why is this the first abo story I've seen on this site? Pretty much everywhere else is absolutely infested with the stuff!

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I kinda wondered that myself when I had the idea for this. Every other fandom has at least a decent number of abo entries, but not this one.

A wild trip, interesting exploration of a (to many of us) novel look at a different set of sexes and how they affect society, love story and hot smut. I'm glad I followed this since the beginning :twilightsmile:

Curious about the epilogue though, when will it come?

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Maybe it's because ponies already call a rather different set of animalistic behaviors and premises.
Also knots go weirdly with horse cock, no matter what bad dragon tells you.

I have love this story so far but all good thing must come to an end, around of applause for I-A-M for writing this story. May Godspeed be on his side for has long as he lives.

Imperial out

Man you really don’t see much omega verse stories here

It was interesting, I think, aye; thank you for writing. :)

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It does! I finished this and to reiterate, like most of your stuff this was weird and hot and heartfelt and I love it. Good ship. Fascinating ride. Glad I read it! This was a fun (sometimes really hot) guided tour through a fetish I didn't even know existed. I don't think I'd go off and read more of it on my own though.

It seemed to me you were exploring the concepts in the Omegaverse and unusual situations in it. The alpha-alpha thing, but also an omega male and the cunning omega female who had more power/control than she let on. At least, I made assumptions about the mechanics of this universe and you subverted them.
Like when I read your Dead By Sunset stories! :twilightsmile:

At times I was wondering if there was an allegory to homosexuality. Then later maybe if it was gender non-conformity. If there was, I think the stronger message was more general and about being honest to yourself and others even if it's not conforming to expectations. Also that submission is hot. :rainbowlaugh:

Comment posted by James Vivien deleted Jun 2nd, 2020

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You really got me in the feels with this story. Thank you so much for it.

Also, I just realised you’re also the Author of Featherfall. Damn you really write relationships well

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Writing relationships is kind of my thing. I also have an Archive of Our Own account where you can find even more useless lesbians.

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What’s your AO3 account name?

Surprisingly, I enjoyed this story more than I thought I would. The romance, the drama, the kinks... all fit well enough.

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'Surprisingly not garbage' should be the tagline of all of my work. :twilightsheepish:

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I know how that feels...

“When we get home,” I replied, “I am going to bend you over the couch and raw dog you until you can’t walk straight.”

“Promise?”

I sighed.

“You little brat.”

. . . . . . .

Lmao, the ending tho...:rainbowlaugh:😂

Ah, God, damn it, good stuff.

We have come to terms.

Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! Would live an alternate ending, maybe one where she actually "Bitched" Applejack, and just goes on a rampage grabbing everyone!

I don’t think I can adequately put into words how much I love this fic. It’s not perfect but gosh it just hits so many good aspects for me. Like. The kinks sure, but also just the characterization (especially how self destructive Sunset is) and the dynamics of these two. I think Sunset and Dash as a ship is criminally underexplored and really it irks me how commonly they’re put at odds with one another through friendship/plot drama. Here their dynamic is a bit combative too, but I like the idea that at the end of the fic they’re both bold enough to have their relationship out in the open and really not care what others think. It makes sense that they would be… daring in their exploits both just generally and sexually. It’s super fun and if you ever end up writing more of them together I’ll be eagerly reading along! Especially if it’s a sequel to this fic!

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