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Calibrating aspirations

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The Cutie Mark Crusaders: friends, colleagues, and, when the occasion calls for it, partners in crime.

Things change over the years. Ponies grow up, move out, and head on. Scootaloo's marriage is only days away, but Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle have one more big job planned before she walks down the aisle. A send off party to celebrate together, just the three of them.

Scootaloo is the last to hear about it.


This story is just one of the many stops on the Monorail! The event's theme is "trains". For a full list of content, click here! The previous story posted was But With a Whimper by Undome Tinwe, go check it out! You're more than welcome to write your own addition, the only requirement is rail transport as a major plot element or location. Have fun!

Chapters (3)
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This is a lot of fun so far. You did a good job presenting a low-stakes conflict in an exciting way. I admit I was a bit confused by how old the CMC are supposed to be here. Sweetie being taller made me think they're teenage, and it's like how Filly Fluttershy was taller than everyone else, but Scootaloo getting married doesn't work with that.

Looking forward to the next (last?) chapter.

I admit being a bit confused by the sequence of the CMC escaping from the Princess Car. Besides that, that was a really sweet ending.

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Thanks for checking back in on the ending, and I'm really glad you enjoyed it.

Re: the action scene, very fair. Blocking has never been my strong suit. Hopefully it didn't break the narrative flow too much.

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