A greedy Master Blackmailer name Coerce Money has in his possession several damaging letters from Princess Celestia Silverlight that she wrote went she was younger. This Master Blackmailer has threatened to sell Celestia’s letters to her greedy nobles if she doesn’t pay his price for their return. At earlier time these letters wouldn’t bother Princess Celestia Silverlight in the least. But now she is mother to her three royal foals, who would do what every the possessor of the letter tell them to protect their mother.
Chapters (4)
"Putting her in very difficult position as the ruling Princess of Equestria." is not a scentence.
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fixed and removed
for some reason the art for the story looks like a pony version of yuki from space battleship yamato
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Ok good luck
Were you going to say something on my user page?
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well my artist Miss Margony on Deviantart is the one that drew the picture for me. If you want to see more of her work.
Check out her page on Deviantart:
https://www.deviantart.com/margony
She very good artist and friend.
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I mistakenly comment on your page sorry about that.
thank you Smug Anime girl
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Oof thats ok, this group can help with grammar and whatnot :D
Neat little story. Only problem ruining immersion is grammar. I highly suggest you get yourself an editor. There’s plenty of groups here that can help you find editors to help with your fics. Otherwise I find the story interesting. Good luck.
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I do have editor.
But I was try the grammarly online program. It look like the program need a little bit of work.
It great for grammer and other thing. But for composition it need a lot of work.
It did well for my other story that I put through it.
But I went against my own gut tell me go see my editor.
So I going to start with this story letting her look through it.
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Thank you for the group suggestion Smug Anime girl.
I have editor just went against my own gut to not go see her.
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oof... we bump into one another again. I think this is what... the 3rd time i have seen you today...
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Huh? Ok if you say so oceanbytez. But still huh?
Wow was not expecting that ending talk about a suprise
Excellent story.
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Thank you daba zaba
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The setup with the plan was good
But how it ended took me by surprise
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👍
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Loving how these storys and characters continue to suprise me
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Thank you Zontan for the review.