As places go, the Western Wasteland was a good place to grow up with my father-- a ghoul blacksmith who taught me to forge, to fight... But he never told me what he did pre-war, why I'm a hippogriff, or what my life was like before he found me.
“Believe me or don’t, kid. But if you’re gonna try and shoot me again, don’t miss this time. You might take out your unicorn friend like you took out your dad.”
Definitely not something that will probably haunt Stormy for a while
Anyways, I definitely enjoyed the introduction of Crimson, as well as the dynamic between the duo. Can't wait to see what you have in store!
I'm glad to see a Fallout:Equestria sidefic in the FB. It's been a long time. All the best on your story, and I hope the parallel audio series is all the more successful. By a first listen to the trailer, it's quality.
Looking good so far. Only issue I see popping up is the incorrect form of "its". "Its" is the possessive form of "it"; "it's" is the contraction of "it is". Again, you're doing great. This is the first Fo:E fic to get my attention other than the usual P:H and Bright Eyes.
10127094 You know, I've gone all my life falsely believing "it's" is the possessive form as well as the contraction, and always being very confused whenever grammar helpers wanted to use "its" instead.
...This has been my revelation of the day. lol Thanks for the feedback!
First FoE I’ve seen that has a Hippogiff as the main character and I love it! I saw it in featured and it’s a great read so far. I hope this leads to a long and interesting story.
Finally after all these years of reading the main character is interesting while also having a female companion who is also interesting and great. I have read stories where its one or the other but never both thank you for having both and dont kill or cripple either of them please.
I'm looking forward to reading this. And welcome back!
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Thanks so much! ^.^
It's been a while since I've written anything, and especially with all the lore FoE has, this has been quite the learning experience~
hey forest cant wait to read this
nice and your already been featured on the home page
huh, you snuck in to get featured day one; that or I might have organized something.
TIL Forest Rain also does fanfic. Neat.
I'm excited to read.
Day one feature and zero dislikes so far? That is a cause for celebration. Will check out later.
Definitely not something that will probably haunt Stormy for a whileAnyways, I definitely enjoyed the introduction of Crimson, as well as the dynamic between the duo. Can't wait to see what you have in store!
I'm glad to see a Fallout:Equestria sidefic in the FB. It's been a long time.
All the best on your story, and I hope the parallel audio series is all the more successful. By a first listen to the trailer, it's quality.
Looking good so far. Only issue I see popping up is the incorrect form of "its".
"Its" is the possessive form of "it"; "it's" is the contraction of "it is".
Again, you're doing great. This is the first Fo:E fic to get my attention other than the usual P:H and Bright Eyes.
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You know, I've gone all my life falsely believing "it's" is the possessive form as well as the contraction, and always being very confused whenever grammar helpers wanted to use "its" instead.
...This has been my revelation of the day. lol Thanks for the feedback!
Congrats on being a featured FoE story!
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Thank you soo much! ^.^
First FoE I’ve seen that has a Hippogiff as the main character and I love it! I saw it in featured and it’s a great read so far. I hope this leads to a long and interesting story.
Looking forward to reading this! Really good so far
Great start to a new story! Looking forward towards more.
Finally after all these years of reading the main character is interesting while also having a female companion who is also interesting and great. I have read stories where its one or the other but never both thank you for having both and dont kill or cripple either of them please.
Crimson Rose is a fantastic character, and I appreciate a stable pony who isn't the main protagonist.
Chrism Rose gives me the feel of a Fallout protag without actually being the protag.
I wish I found out there was a hippogriffs FoE fic years ago. Really fun so far! And Crimson Rose is adorable 🥰
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Hey, I know that horse!👋