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Ah yes, my favorite rating for a clop story.

Oh they fixed it. Nice.

Well hellooooo there~

Hmmm...this has a setup for some hilariously perverted situations.

Please tell me this was a commission and you were bribed a large sum of money. I’m begging you.

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You know something is happening when a story approver hopes that a story was written under duress...

Idk what i would do without your sparity stories, it fuels my urge to continue life.

I'm guessing the concern.jpeg is coming from people who aren't familiar with the cover art? Assuming it's a similar situation, it isn't that weird. Portal/voodoo/etc remote sex seems to be a relatively common idea in magical settings.

Oh boy new Sparity. I am intrigued. I remember that lumineko comic, it was p good. Hopefully this is too.

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You'd think a story approver would be the last sort of pony to complain about story content they don't like. Mais non.

Ahh Mr.B you did it! You captured the stark anatomical juxtaposition between two xenophilic lovers that despite there feelings for one another, fInd it physically difficult to be together. A concept I struggled with and failed in my early attempts at writing. Yet here it is for all to see, no longer just an idea or concept lying just beyond my reach. I'm inspired to breath new life into some of my old projects.
Thumbs up, favorite,follow.

This will be interesting for sure. It is nice to see Rarity couldn't go through with cheating on Spike. It kinda sucks that her desires grew to the point she even considered it but at least she pulled back at the last moment. Tho I wonder will she ever tell Spike what she ALMOST did, I think she might keep that to herself. As of now nothing has happen and it would only hurt him. Even more so since she has just came up with a way to fix that issue. Oh this could be so fun to be sure. If the doll is magic that means best chance it will be a perfect fit for Spike, which would mean SHE would be a perfect fit for him lol. Which could be even more fun if he start to use it more and more, even in situations and times she wouldn't think he would be using it. Like in the middle of the day. I can see her trying to talk to someone or do something all while a SUPER horny dragon is just going to town on that doll for who knows how long. I love Sparity stories and they are a bit rare now so seeing more of these is always a great thing

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I guess jokes go to die here, my B.

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Jackripper is my pal, and thus, this is his way of showing his love—torturing me incessantly. Rest assured it's all in good fun and no harm should come in the making of. No need for downvotes and such, gang.

As for the perspective on the matter? The cover-art implies a child-looking Spike using a Rarity fleshlight and the story deals with them in a romatic and erotic situation. Despite him aged up, the outside still appears the same. His 'WTF?' is a bit justified in that regard. But nonetheless, I'm thankful for everyone checking out this story... despite how fucking strange it is.

F'naaaaaaaaa. I need a Monster.
~ Yr. Pal, B

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You might want to mention he's aged up, then. I assumed this was foalcon, and if it's markedly "adult" you may get some disappointed readers.

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Clop authors have to deal with a lot of shit from readers on their story pages, so I don't think it's surprising if somepony doesn't pick up on the sarcasm.

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You misspelled "unicornally".

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pfft

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I think you need to reevaluate your friendship

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Stockholm syndrome

Interesting start. Let’s see where this goes. Tracked for now, but a like you must earn.

This is cyoot so far. Not a fan of RaraSpike tbh but I love the, plush aspect

Very nice. Compromise. Good job, Rarity.

“Indeed. It very much does the 'sucking' as you phrase it.”

This line sounds more like somepony who's learning Ponish and hasn't mastered sentence structure rather than a sophisticated mare of the upper crust.
Also, your lengthy style of narration is something many writers strive towards, but I find it pretentious and obtuse.

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