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Atlas INC


Despite all the alternate universes and timelines one thing remains constant, love.

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A Batpony named Sapphire is lost from her family after a fierce storm, with the help of new friends she must brave the journey and make it back to her family. Sapphire and her new friend will encounter many new things that neither of them have seen before along their way to bring Sapphire home. Will they succeed or will they perish to the new evils of this world, read to find (not) out!

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Comments ( 7 )

“And I am Ventura, Ventura Meadows.”

If you add an 'a' tu ventura means adventure in spanish 'aventura' :v

An interesting start, the idea is interesting.

The character dialogue seems a little underwhelming.

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It is underwhelming, first time making a story that will have dialogue but anyways your correct

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The premise is interesting. If you would like help with the Dialogue I have a couple of books, and I'm more than happy to help if you'd like.

Comment posted by Atlas INC deleted Apr 10th, 2020

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I actually didn’t know that, thanks for that little tidbit of trivia

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