Nightingale wasn't sure what to expect when she became Princess Twilight's lover. As she soon finds out, ancient alicorn princesses carry many secrets. Perhaps some are better left unspoken.
Written for the January Writeoff: "On Thin Ice."
Artwork by GroaningGreyAgony.
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I just finished this.
It is 2:49 AM.
I strongly suspect I'm going to have some seriously weird dreams.
I think that means the story is really good. So, good job.
(But if your cover art crawls out of my closet and zorps me, I am SO going to haunt you.)
I like it. But you left too many things unsaid. Like who was Twilight's first love (we know it's not Pinkie at least)?
And what kind of pony, or other creature for that matter, is Nightingale? Among other things to be honest. Details. There's so much here for it to be a one shot.