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Comment section minigames for the Trixie Can Learn chapter of this story (anypony can play them in this comment section).
Does this story remind you of a song that you know? If yes, post it in the comments in the following format:
- Chapter of the story that this song is relevant to.
- A link or embedded Youtube video of it.
- Percentage of correlation (0% being an unrelated song, 100% being a song written exactly for this story).
- The reason why this song reminded you of this story or the excerpt of the lyrics.
Music to listen to while reading:
Lahannya - Save Me — Correlation: 40% (Lyrics)
Am I the remedy, or am I the poisson? - Now that the darkness has leached to my skin
Once I had fallen - Despite your warnings - It was already too late
Rescue me from everlasting agony - Rescue me... Save me from myself
making Trixie take the blame for the Ursa Minor really sours me on Twilight on this chapter
10109247 Well, there would be any Ursa Minor incident if Trixie didn't come into town that day. Trixie did have a hoof in the matter, at least to some degree.
10109252
she had no way of knowing there was an Ursa Minor anywhere near Ponyville or that a pair of colts would be dumb enough and unsupervised enough to go and find it
10109259 You speak just like Trixie. She also had almost unwavering conviction.
The truth might have meaning in the real world, but in Twilight's dungeon, her word is law.
I cannot sway you to the other side, but I bet Twilight could change your opinion on this matter. She can be very convincing.
Twilight's counter-arguments, along with a gag, would leave you speechless.
I'm starting to wonder where you pull all this from in your mind, because this is starting to not be enjoyable to read.
Trixie committing suicide would be a mercy for herself at this point.
10109396 Is it a problem of bad writing or bad content?
And it will take a bit more to get Trixie to suicidal levels.
10109487
Mm, neither, just dark content. It's like hopelessness; there's no change. You write perfectly fine, and this is what I expected from the story , but it does become a bit dreary.
It's like The Taming of the Shrew, but without anything other than the 'taming' portion. It's just constant psychological torture.
Twilight is insane. The thing is that it seems mostly disinhibition; she always had it in her beneath the surface.
10109506 Maybe it's an acquired taste.
The real story is in Trixie's mental walls crumbling down one by one.
10109516 It's always the nerdiest ones.
Twilight, you've gone crazy.
11089043 There might be some side effects from using the crystal. Since Trixie was the one who used it, it's her own fault. She's just ripping what she sowed.