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Comment section minigames for the Tables Turn chapter of this story (anypony can play them in this comment section).
Does this story remind you of a song that you know? If yes, post it in the comments in the following format:
- Chapter of the story that this song is relevant to.
- A link or embedded Youtube video of it.
- Percentage of correlation (0% being an unrelated song, 100% being a song written exactly for this story).
- The reason why this song reminded you of this story or the excerpt of the lyrics.
Music to listen to while reading:
Godhead - The Reckoning — Correlation: 70% (Lyrics)
I'll take you down - To a hole where you - Will always be alone
I'll push you off - Of the throne that - You erected for yourself - You will be tossed - On a pile of all the - Filth that you created
HB - Time of Silence — Correlation: 50% (Lyrics)
You have heard me speak in untruthful ways - Time of silence come - You know what I’ve done
I believe and yet I fear - I know without doubt my punishment is near
The Birthday Massacre - Looking Glass — Correlation: 40% (Lyrics)
It's a glass cage so I can't pretend - You hide beneath the physical - I see it coming - But I can't defend
Tell me what I want to say - Save me for another day - Break me, it's the game you play
Apoptygma Berzerk - Love to blame — Correlation: 40% (Lyrics)
We've reaped the fruits of deception - Opened the doors of perception - And burned down all the bridges - We came across
Garbage - Stupid Girl — Correlation: 40% (Lyrics)
You pretend you're anything - Just to be adored
The Crüxshadows - Marilyn, My Bitterness — Correlation: 40% (Lyrics)
Did you think it wouldn't hurt - Did you think I wouldn't feel - When the world came falling down - Or maybe you didn't think at all - And that's why I feel what I feel now
Nemesea - No More — Correlation: 40% (Lyrics)
I can't and I won't believe - The lies you told me - You can't and you can't - Deceive me, hurt me anymore
It won't be the same - Your the one to blame
Andra Dare - Dacryphilia — Correlation: 40% (Lyrics)
Caught in dark devising - Lovely doll, let's do some revising - Who controls your fate and your soul? - Darling I like it when you cry
Jack Off Jill - Nazi Halo — Correlation: 40% (Lyrics)
Can't fix my problem - You crossed a thin line - You can't just work it out - not with me this time
Moxie Raia - I Love It When You Cry — Correlation: 40% (Lyrics)
I love it when you cry - It shows that you're alive - I love it when you cry - The tears bring out your eyes
"Teen" and "Porn" do not belong on the same story. I know you're supposed to be a bad dragon but not that kind of badness.
10088089 Foreplay can be part of porn, too!
I'll change the story to mature when more kinky stuff comes along. Thus far, it's teens friendly.
Edit: I'll just remove the Porn tag for now since it isn't applicable in the first chapter.
Edit, Edit: The story is now mature.
Uh, ok then.
Yeah.
Something's not right here.
Twilight is mental.
10088122 She swapped bodies twice in one day. I imagine that can't be healthy for one's psyche, especially since Sombra's artifact was used for that.
10088101
That seems like a rather disingenuous attitude. If you don't have a detailed map of a story ahead of time, and maybe you start out with the intent of writing it as something that's teen-friendly but it moves in a more mature direction, that'd be one thing. But it sounds like that's not the case here: it's an entry for a clopfics competition, and you seem reasonably certain it's going in a more explicit direction.
So, I dunno. I can see where you're coming from, but this feels kinda sketchy to me. There've been cases where I've seen people get pretty pissed off at a story that had a dark ending but wasn't tagged as a tragedy or anything like that. If you know what direction a story's going in, I don't see a reason to not give it all the tags it'll eventually need right away.
10088089
Admittedly, they could still work if the content was non-explicit, but still, well a blatant attempt at porn. It's why you have to have a very specific filter on derpibooru instead of just "Default" because it will still show stuff like incest and fetish content if you don't make an edited filter to only show art. This just isn't the way to go about that, especially if the story is going to have explicit material later on.
I tried to figure out whether the personalities and memories are intact or scrambled, but it is too early to tell; certainly, Twilight is extreme, but she cut off the wings of Spike and tried to do likewise to the horn of Sweetie Belle. I need more information, which means more chapters.
What the hell is wrong with you, I don’t like it.
10279640 You know what, I do sometimes wonder if it's really the best use of my talents to write fanfiction on a pony site.
But then I see comments like yours, and I think to myself, Totally worth it!