At the very end, the last paragraph begins with the same sentence the paragraph before it ended with.
With her boobs bulging beneath the top. She left the locker room. As she was walking, she internally grinned at all of the male students staring at her massive boobs.
As she was walking, she internally grinned at all of the male students staring at her massive boobs. As she passed a particular unicorn stallion, she heard a loud ripping sound. Just in time she looked down to see the chest area of her top rip exposing large amounts of cleavage to the world. He blushed at the sight, and Smolder loved the dumbfounded look on his face. Nevertheless, she had a reputation to uphold among the students of the school, “Take a picture it'll last longer.”
Thunderlane, huh. You'd think if she wants guys who look "hard" and work out, she'd go for Bulk.
She's gonna be so mad when she sees Silver.
At the very end, the last paragraph begins with the same sentence the paragraph before it ended with.
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fixed, thanks for pointing that out
This was a awesomely chill chapter I can't wait Intel she sees Silver it going to be hilarious.