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That cover art is hilarious.

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Jargon Scott is a god damned national treasure.

This was a fun little read, a two headed girl is a weird concept though. My boner was too confused.

FYI b, there were lots of little wonky typos or wrong words here or there ya good, lay off the redbull!

And horses have an 11 month pregnancy!

Still liked it, even though it included worst character (Spike)

:)

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My bugger up. Uploaded the first draft instead of the second. Should find those mistakes, padding, and other such defects removed. Also tinkered with a few things.

And good seeing you back on here, Clops. :D
~ Yr. Pal, B

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Nice! Does one of those defects include spike?

(For those not in the know this is how I tweak b no need to downvote)

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I'll kiel you.

(And Clops is my pal and a great person; allow these good qualities to forgive his terrible tastes in characters.)

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And horses have an 11 month pregnancy!

And humans are born abnormally early in their gestation period due to their proportionally galaxy-sized brains, which ponies presumably also have. This probably doesn't chop off exactly two months, but I fudge it otherwise because I'm the sort of person whose headcanon explanation for sandwiches is "Equestria doesn't actually make sense. Science doesn't work. Nopony told you because you're so cute when you get into something" directed at Twilight. (The actual position is more nuanced but it definitely starts with that barely-modified XKCD quote, no question)

That title, this chapter, you sir
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Loved the bickering between Chrysi and Cadence

This was an interesting read....:twilightsheepish:
Now all we need is a spin off story of the adventures of Cadeylis! er I mean Chrydence! Oh you know what I mean :trollestia:

But does she shapeshift into Twilight?

So I didn’t really notice twilight ever give an actual explanation for why they were fused into a single body. I’m still confused as to why that part was necessary.

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Chrysalis' ability to births hives; Candance's ability to birth quality. Joining them grants quality to quantity.

MOW

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Well, good thing Twilight didn't botch it combining their abilities the other way, then.

“But don’t look so glum! Just because nearly nothing exists out there doesn’t mean here is completely barren of life!” Shining turned back to Twilight, who’d turned to her side, gesturing the pod on the wall. “There are still survivors across the globe.”

As long as this mare is around hope is not lost.
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Source.

“You two should be going through intense sensations of waking up! How did getting angry bypass all of that?”
Chrysalis snickered. “Never underestimate the power of hate.”
Cadance rolled her eyes. “Now this is something I can agree with her on.”

That may be the main reason the world outside is going to heck...


Interesting story.
I enoyed reading it.
Even if it is based upon an pretty weird (even by pony standards) concept.

This took a sudden turn Oo
At least Chrysi is still best pony

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