A week had passed since the Wonka contest officially began, already the entire thing had gotten crazier. Within that time, most candy stores across the world were sold out of Wonka Bars and thus making it harder to find a single Bar anywhere. Yet, after all this time, not a single golden ticket had been round. However, everyone knew it was only a matter of time before at least one was found, and who knows just how much crazier everything would get?
Another school day came to an end for Charlie Bucket, as the school bell rang, and all the students burst out the front door. Charlie was one of the last students to exit the building and as soon as he was outside, he saw his friends standing there waiting for him.
“Hiya Charlie!” Rainbow greets. “How was school today?
“It was alright I suppose,” He replied.
Though he seemed to act and sound okay, every pony could tell, based on his body language, he wasn’t as okay as he was trying to make himself out to be.
“What’s wrong, Charlie?” Twilight asked.
“What do you mean?” Charlie smiled. “I’m perfectly fine.”
“Are yah sure, sugar cube?” Applejack questioned. “Yah don’t seem fine.”
“Of course, A.J.,” Charlie assured. “I promise!”
The ponies and the little baby dragon, especially Applejack, could still tell he wasn’t being honest about his feelings. However, they figured if they pestered him any further they’d never get the answer. So, for now, they decided to drop the subject until Charlie was ready to talk.
“Well, alright then,” Twilight nodded, comfortingly. “But just so you know, if you ever need to talk to us about anything, we’ll be here to listen. Believe me, I speak from experience.”
Charlie nods with a reassuring smile, as they walk down the road back to the Bucket house. As they walked, Charlie noticed that two particular members of the group were not presently with them.
“Where are Cheese and Pinkie?” Charlie asked, curiously.
When the group heard him, the ponies and Spike look at each other a smile.
“Oh, they decided to stay at the house today,” Fluttershy said.
Charlie raised his eyebrow, cocking his head to the side confused.
“Why is that? Don’t they normally come along with you guys?”
“Oh yes indeed, darling,” Rarity nodded. “It’s just they had some errands they needed to do today.”
“Like what?”
“Oh, you’ll see,” Spike smiled.
As they kept walking, Charlie could see the ponies and Spike giving each other sneaky smiles. It was as if they were secretly communicating with each other over something he’s not supposed to know. But before Charlie could question them further, they nearly pass the television store when they noticed a large gathering of people surrounding the window. They all stopped in their tracks, cocking their heads to the side curiously.
“What’d ya’ll suspect is goin’ on over yonder?” Applejack asked.
“No idea,” Rainbow responds. “But only one way to find out.”
The group walked toward the large group, trying to wiggle their way through to see what everyone’s looking at.
“Excuse me!” Rainbow called out. “Mind giving some space here! OUCH! Watch the tail, buddy! Okay, that’s it!”
Having had enough, Rainbow took the air and hovered over the crowd, while the others managed to get just close enough to see what’s up. They could all see on the television facing the store window that a live news broadcast is in progress.
“We began with five golden tickets like five lucky bolts of lightning without notice at any point on the map. No one knew where, no one knew when the first one would hit. But as you all know, last night we got our answer. While we in America slept, the first golden ticket was found in the small town of Duselheim, Germany. We’ve been waiting several hours for the follow-up story, and we’re finally ready with a live report.”
The television than transitioned over to another live broadcast emanating from Duselheim, where a German reporter was doing a live report inside a restaurant.
“Proud we are, for the attention of the entire world focuses today right here in Duselheim, a community suddenly thrust into prominence by the unexpected discovery of the first Wonka Golden Ticket. Its lucky finder is the son of our prominent parve-butcher. The boy’s name: Augustus Gloop!”
The reporter made his way over to one of the tables where a family was in the middle of eating. The camera zoomed toward a large portly-looking child, apparently the son, who barely paid attention to the cameras. He was too busy stuffing his face with a forkful of food or gushing it down with a mug (Probably ‘beer’).
“Augustus Gloop, the pride of Duselheim, the fame of Western Germany, an example for the whole world.”
Rainbow Dash scoffed, smirking at the reporter’s choice of words for Gloop.
“An example of what happens when you don’t exercise,” She joked to herself.
“Yeah, figured whichever kid would find the first ticket would be fat, fat, fat,” Spike chuckled.
“Shh! Don’t be rude!” Twilight scolds, turning back to the screen.
“Augustus, how does it make you feel to be the first Golden Ticket finder?” The reporter asked.
“Hungry,” Augustus responds.
“Any other feelings?”
“Feel sorry for Wonka. It’s gonna cost him a fortune in fudge.”
Practically the entire group was quite appalled, if not disgusted, not only of the boy’s attitude but his poor eating habits. All of them witnessing him practically scarfing down his food.
“Oh my!” Fluttershy gasped.
“What I tell you?” Spike spoke. “What a porker!”
“I normally wouldn’t lower myself to insensitive remarks,” Rarity spoke. “But what a repulsive boy!”
Every pony else and Charlie couldn’t help but nod at Rarity’s statement.
“Augustus, the world wants to know, how did you ever find that ticket?” The reporter asked.
“I am eating the Wonka bar and I taste something that is not chocolate,” The boy answers, between bites. “Or coconut or walnut or peanut butter or nougat or butter brittle or caramel or sprinkles.”
The boy takes another big gulp of his drink, before reaching down toward his pocket.
“So I look… And I find the golden ticket.”
The boy holds up the golden ticket, which had a notable bite mark on the far-left corner.
“Augustus, how did you celebrate?” The reporter asked.
“I eat!” The boy answered, bluntly.
The reporter then turns to the man, presumably the boy’s father, the butcher.
“Mr. Gloop, would you mind saying—”
The reporter quickly found his question cut off, when Mr. Gloop literally bit the head off of the microphone and proceeds to eat it.
The group looked on disgusted, completely shock. Rarity nearly faints before Applejack and Twilight caught her.
“Did that man just… Eat a microphone?” Spike asked, in disbelief.
“Eeyup!” Applejack nodded.
“Mrs. Gloop, would you care to say a few words to the television audience?” The reporter asked.
“I just knew Augustus would find a Golden Ticket. Eating is his hobby, you know. In fact, he eats so many candy bars a day that it was not possible for him ‘not’ to find one. We encourage him. He wouldn’t do it unless he needed the nourishment, would he? Anyway, it’s all vitamins.”
As Mrs. Gloop spoke with the reporters, a waiter came by to deliver more food for Augustus. This one waiter wore octagon-framed spectacles and a scar over his left eye. Most of the group didn’t notice that he appeared to whisper something into Augustus’ ear.
Eventually the newscast came to an end, as the large assembly of people disperse from the area. All that were left behind were our ‘mane’ heroes and Charlie, standing there taking it in.
“Well, there yah have it,” Applejack points out. “The first golden ticket has been found.”
“And only four tickets left,” Charlie added.
“Now that they’ve found one,” Rainbow spoke. “I’m sure things will really get crazy!”
Twilight turns over to Charlie, noticing the sad look on his face as he gazed at the television. Now she realized why he seemed so upset earlier, how he must’ve heard someone else had found the ticket first. And since they all just witnessed who it was, Twilight felt sympathetic for Charlie. She walks alongside the boy, placing a comforting hoof along his arm. He looks down at her seeing her smiling up at him.
“Don’t worry Charlie,” She said, comfortingly. “There are still plenty of chances to find one.”
Charlie smiled, half-heartedly, as they all proceed to keep walking toward his house. As the sun began to set over the horizon, they finally made it back to the house. Just before they were about to go in, however, Twilight held them back for a moment.
“Ready to go inside, Charlie?” Twilight asked.
Charlie looked toward each and every one of their faces, noting the smug looks.
“Alright guys, what’s going on?” Charlie asked.
Twilight just smiled as she used her magic to throw open the door. When Charlie walked in, he couldn’t believe what he saw.
“SURPRISE!!!”
To his shock and surprise, the entire room had been set up for a party, ‘his’ birthday party to be exact. There were streamers set up everywhere and a large birthday cake in the middle courtesy of a certain pink party pony. Speaking of which, she and Cheese, both wearing party hats, blew through some kazoos as the other ponies and Spike joined in.
Cheese Sandwich (Sings):
We baked you a birthday cake…
Pinkie Pie (Sings):
If you get a tummy ache…
Spike (Sings):
And you moan, and groan, and woe…
Everyone (Sings):
Don’t forget we told you so!
“Happy Birthday, Charlie!” Everyone cheered.
Charlie couldn’t wipe the smile off his face, as Pinkie and Cheese ran up to the boy and gave him a big group hug.
“Do you like it, Charlie boy?!” Pinkie rambled, excitedly. “Do you really, really, REALLY like it? I hope you do. Me and Cheese worked super-duper hard on it! Okay, actually it wasn’t ‘that’ hard for us, but we did it all for you!”
Pinkie and Cheese release their friend from their group hug, as Pinkie pulled her party cannon out of her mane and used it to shoot confetti all over the room.
“Thank you guys!” Charlie smiled. “It really means a lot you went through all this trouble just for my birthday.”
“Aw, it was no trouble at all, little buddy!” Cheese said. “What are Cheese Sandwiches and Pinkie Pies for?”
“So, this is what you guys tried to hide from me?” Charlie asked Twilight.
“Yeah, Pinkie wanted us to stall for a while so everything would be ready,” Twilight said. “She wanted this to be your best birthday as possible.”
“That is very kind of you, all of you,” Charlie said. “Thank you!”
Charlie’s mother approaches her son, handing him a present and a kiss on the cheek.
“Here you are, Charlie,” She said.
“Thank you!” He smiled.
The ponies and Spike gather around beside the grandparents and Mrs. Bucket, as they watch Charlie open his present. Inside, he pulls out a hand-stitched red scarf which he wrapped around his neck.
“It’s terrific!”
“We each knitted a bit,” Mrs. Bucket smiled. “Grandma Georgina, Grandma Josephine, and me.”
“I did the end pieces with the little tassels,” Grandma Josephine said.
“It is certainly a wonderful scarf,” Rarity admired. “Very well stitched and quite stylish, if I do say so myself.”
“Thank you, Rarity,” Mrs. Bucket said.
Grandpa Joe reached behind him, pulling out a little present which he hands to Charlie.
“And here’s a little gift from Grandpa George and me.”
“Oh, I think I know what this is.”
Charlie excitedly tears open the present, finding a Wonka candy. Not a Wonka Bar specifically, but still another favorite of his products.
“It is! A Wonka!” He says, excitedly.
“Open it, Charlie,” Grandpa Joe said. “Let’s see that golden ticket.”
“A lifetime of chocolate awaits you, Charlie my boy,” Cheese pats his back.
“Just don’t forget to share it with your good friends,” Pinkie smiled.
“Wouldn’t it be fantastic?”
“It’s not fair to raise his hopes,” Mrs. Bucket scolds.
“Never mind!” Grandpa Joe argued. “Go on, open it Charlie. I want to see that gold!”
“Stop it, Dad!”
“I’ve got the same chance as anybody else, haven’t I?” Charlie asked.
“Of course you do, Charlie,” Twilight encouraged. “If anyone else can find one, you can.”
“You’ve got more Charlie because you want it more,” Grandpa Joe added. “Go on, open it.”
“Okay, here goes,” Charlie prepared himself.
Charlie turns his back from the rest of the group, proceeding to slowly open the Wonka.
“Now, Charlie, don’t feel too disappointed,” Fluttershy advised. “You know, if you don’t get the… Um… You know…”
“What Fluttershy means, Charlie,” Applejack interrupts. “Whatever happens, you’ll still have the candy.”
“Mm-hmm.”
“I’ve got it”! Charlie yelled.
“Where? Where?” Grandpa Joe asked.
“Come on, let’s see!” Spike beckoned.
When Charlie turned around, however, the only thing he held in his hand was the Wonka candy itself. But no golden ticket, much to his disappointment.
“Fooled you, didn’t I?” Charlie asked, dejectedly. “You thought I really had it.”
Everyone else in the room seemed disappointed as well, seeing how they knew Charlie wanted to win the contest so badly.
“Ah well,” Applejack concludes. “That’s that.”
“Never mind, Charlie,” Grandpa Joe reassured. “You’ll find one.”
“Besides, there’s still four golden tickets left,” Rainbow points out.
Grandpa Joe turned to her direction; an eyebrow raised. This was certainly news to him and the rest of Charlie’s family.
“Only four? You mean they found one?”
“Indeed,” Rarity nodded, explaining. “We were walking Charlie home from school when we noticed a rather large gathering outside the television shop.”
“We practically had to push our way to the front,” Twilight added. “That’s when we saw the news that one of the tickets was found by some boy in Germany named Augustus Gloop.”
“Man, I can only imagine where the next ticket will be found,” Spike pondered.
Just then, Cheese Sandwich noticed Charlie starting to break the candy into tiny pieces.
“What are you doing, Charlie boy?” Cheese asked.
“I want to share it,” Charlie answered.
“Oh, no, Charlie,” Fluttershy shook her head. “Not your birthday present.”
“It’s my Wonka, Fluttershy,” Charlie stated. “And I’ll do what I want with it.”
Seeing it was useless to argue, the ponies, Spike, and Charlie’s family nod understandingly. Charlie hands each of them a tiny piece, making sure there was just enough for everyone in the room. They all said their thanks, enjoying the taste of the chocolate as they took tiny bites out of their already small pieces savoring the flavor despite how bittersweet this birthday turned out to be.
Little did they know, the finder of the next golden ticket would make Augustus Gloop look like an angel in heaven compared to them…
Wow if things are gonna get worse then I might be trouble love the chapter
Once again good use of the lines and nods towards the Johnny Depp version with some of those scenes shown in this chapter.
And so the first ticket has been found. I'm surprised the ponies were disgusted that Augustus was for all we know eating meat. The funnier scene in the interview was the reported standing in the right frame to make it look like that mounted animal's antlers were sticking out of his head.
Oh goodie goodie one down four to go and next comes my second favorite of the five children apart from Charlie Veruca Salt ( Wonka of course is my favorite adult character). I always thought that she was a bit cute and funny despite her attitude plus she wore my favorite color red, of course Violet was cute too but I like veruca best.
I hope you guys stick to how mean and nasty she was in the film because in my opinion compared to her the book and Tim Burton Versions were sweethearts
The little Brute, Veruca Salt is next!
I have a good feeling what the next chapter is. Great work by the way, keep it up!
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It’s actually Violet Beauregard who’s next
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no, veruca salt 'found' the second ticket.
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No Violet's the third golden ticket winner, she's the second one to leave the factory tour after Augustus
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Actually, I think the order was: Agustus, Veruca, Violet, Mike, fake, Charlie as far as tickets, but Veruca's was never shown to be announced on the news. Proof: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QdHgvNb6WRE for those who don't do links: News caster: golden ticket number 3.
The order of the downfall was: Agustus, Violet, Veruca, Mike.
I wouldn't want to be the parent of that brat.
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Honestly, i dont think any decent adult would.
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What Gameplayer 64 said.
They will notice the man?
Man, I betcha when they see Veruca, they will compare her to how bratty Diamond Tiara used to be or how bratty Cozy Glow is now!
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Trust me there will be a lot of stories
The Augustus Gloop from the 1971 movie wasn't really...that horrible.
He was pudgy, but not grotesquely bad.
So the first ticket finder is officially found, in a way it's kind of ironic that the first kid who finds the ticket is not only a bit on the portly side, but a German too (Being part German myself, you know us when it comes to good eating). Anyways, while we can acknowledge that in the classic movie he wasn't a completely horrid boy we do know that he's drawn by an unsatisfied desire for consumption (Whereas in the remake, there are elements where parts of his greediness are shown... Like when he denied Charlie a piece of chocolate, for example). Still and all, that does leave four golden tickets left to find and as we know based on how often we've seen this movie, we see that the other kids who managed to find the tickets are not as what we call very pleasant (Although I think at least one other isn't too bad, just a bit on the obnoxious side).
Also, if you guys didn't catch it before, there's a certain reference to 'The Three Stooges' we casually slid in there and I got to say I think it worked wonders for this chapter.
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It is possible, if not probable. As more tickets are discovered, there's this sense of hopelessness knowing that a kid like Charlie is not likely to find the Golden Ticket because compared to anyone else he can't afford to buy anything close to 2,000 candy bars (Not like his family ever had that much money to buy that much). And it's not just Charlie's chances of going into the factory as being slim, but unless there is a miracle Pinkie won't have the means to save The Cakes' bakery from possibly being run to the ground if it has to close.
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In a way, we found it a bit of a strategic element to deploy. This way, rather than choosing between which version is the superior adaptation, an appropriate strategy would be to determine as to how it would be if some of those elements were combined to form one movie. Now I doubt we'll include 'every' moment from Tim Burton's movie and add it to the version most of us knows, but it all depends on what we know will work.
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Considering the ponies have been around a few humans during their previous trips, what we need to bear in mind is that I'm sure they're slowly starting to see that most humans do eat meat. Heck, we can't ignore the past few trips Twilight Sparkle had to the human world where I doubt all of the people she's met are vegetarians (Regardless if seeing them eat meat is a bit uncomfortable). I think what kind of bothered the girls is that Augustus comes off as this kid who inhales his food rather than tasting it, course I won't deny I'm a pretty quick eater myself. But whereas Augustus probably hasn't lifted a 15lb weight in his life, I at least am able to work off whatever I eat so I don't have to do a diet.
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I hear what you're saying. Heck, when I see Veruca's face, I'm reminded of someone I know rather personally. I wouldn't call this person bratty as Veruca, regardless which version we are referring to, but she does come off as a bit of a diva... Sometimes. I think for the sake of this movie, I think I believed that Veruca is more of a brat than what we see in the Tim Burton which I'll admit her personality is a bit 'bland' even at times when she does get displeased.
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We can't say when the next chapter will come out. But we're already putting together the plans as to how we want to go about.
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For those who are confused, especially you my friend. Veruca technically only got the ticket because a factory worker found it for her and all she's getting out of it is that 1lb bonus in her pay pocket. Meanwhile, Veruca takes the ticket as the 'second' ticket holder and then eventually Violet becomes the third person to find her ticket. But then we see the pattern is switched when it's Violet who's the second kid who fails her test then Veruca soon after. Hopefully by explaining this manner as thoroughly as possible, we can avoid any further argument and actually start putting some logical sense into the matter at hand.
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Yes you do have the order of the ticket findings correct (As well as the downfall of the kids, except for Charlie). And it's true Veruca 'technically' didn't have her interview when that ticket was found... We're definitely going to need to go over this scene over and over when determining how to put it together for a chapter.
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I wouldn't blame you. Especially since the way she pushes her father to take pills to relieve himself of the stress of going through all that trouble for a ticket. Be glad she's not running to become Queen of England unless she wanted to... Course, there's no election for that position and it don't work that way like it does in the states.
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Veruca's personality would remind the Mane Six about Diamond Tiara in terms of the fact that they are both spoiled and snobbish. But it may also serve as a wake-up call and a reminder as to why they are here and it's not to see the sights. A bakery is in trouble, Pinkie is likely to be homeless (And I doubt any of her friends will let her stay at either of their homes, least not on 'permanent' rent), and if the business goes down, the whole family who ran it for years will have to find something else to do. I mean I'm sure there are other bakeries in Equestria, but which one would hire the Cakes if the plan was to bestow the business to the kids?
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The valid point was not to accuse this kid of being bad, it's not like he's really done anything wrong or illegal. We merely point out the obvious nature of the boy as well as certain habits that play a major part of his character during the course of the movie. Or at least for the most time he's on screen.
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Thanks
Who do you like most Veruca or Violet
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Yeah, but they treating him like he is 2005 Augustus Gloop, who was far more mean-spirited.
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That's like asking me if I were to like peanut butter or oysters as my preferred cause of death (Fortunately, I don't have those allergies).
I will say that in terms of the 1970s version, I would find Violet a bit annoying yet I'd be content with her (Despite being rude to her parents) over an English brat who terrorized her own father.
As for the Tim Burton version, I again find Violet more interesting but mostly because she's more than just a gum chewer. She's a fierce competitor, driven to win at all cost, and that scene when she beat down two men in karate makes me think... Oh yeah, don't want to mess with her. As for Veruca, in this movie especially... She's just kind of bland to me and not as interesting as the original.
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All with good intentions I assure you. It's all part of the plan the team has worked hard to put together.
Alright, we got the glutton. That only leaves us with the brat, the chewer and the tv addict.
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That's right. It's pretty much the best way to describe the four children that Charlie will be up against. Despite their habits and personalities, these four kids (Having been the first to find their tickets) seemed the most likely to win the grand prize for various reasons. Augustus having a strong appetite to try all the food, Violet looking to once more one up that Cornelia chick, Veruca's extreme desire to have it for herself, and Mike... Well, a moment like this would mean BIG publicity and thus cementing him in television history forever. They would never expect a kid like Charlie to even so much as go this far because to them it seems he only got the last ticket out of luck.
After all, most of these kids weren't going on this tour to make friends. Most of them were just focused on the prize.
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Very well put! Nice reference to “the Return of Harmony”!
well too mush bar are bad for you
Good use of more of the Charlie & the Chocolate Factory dialogue.
Toola Roola: Something IS wrong with Charlie, I know it.
Coconut Cream: And I think I know why.
Discord: As do I, Coconut.
(The other foals nodded in agreement.)
Rumble: (grins) Ohh, I know what they're up to!
Twist: (excitedly) Yeah! Those girls are--
Discord: Shh, shh, shh, shh, shh! Don't spoil it! This is what makes it fun!
(The foals giggled in excitement, knowing what's going on.)
Peach Fuzz: What's going on?
Pipsqueak: Are they seeing a new product at the TV store?
Spur: Maybe it's something on the TV that's getting their attention!
Apple Bloom: Yeah, let's keep watching.
Spur: I knew it!
Petunia Paleo: The first ticket is found?! No way!
Kettle Corn: But who found it?
Sweetie: Yeah, VERY repulsive!
Apple Bloom: And I hate his attitude, too!
(The foals' jaws dropped open in shock and disgust at seeing this part.)
Biscuit: I think I'm gonna be sick.
Apple Bloom: Hey, that waiter looks suspicious.
Sweetie: Yeah, what's he whispering to him?
Discord: Hmm... good question.
Scootaloo: You said it, Rainbow Dash!
Crusaders: (excitedly) IT'S CHARLIE'S BIRTHDAY!!
Discord: (giddily) Ohhh, I knew it!!
Wind Sprint: (happily) Pinkie, you're the best!
Sweetie: Yeah, a lovely scarf! I wish I had one of those, too. (gasps excitedly) Maybe Rarity could make one of those for me!
Crusaders: (excitedly, in unison) A Wonka bar?!
Cotton Cloudy: Then Charlie's gotta have the second ticket!
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Foals: Awwww...
Apple Bloom: Yeah, they worked so hard to give him that bar as a present.
Wind Sprint: Some birthday this is for him...
Zipporwhill: At least they still have the cake Pinkie and Cheese made him. That's enough food to last them a while.
Apple Bloom: But Charlie's still gotta find a golden ticket, badly.
Sweetie: Yeah. If he can't, he'll be a poor and miserable boy forever.
Discord: I agree with you, kids. But believe you me, the next ticket finder is gonna be so bad, it'll make Diamond Tiara look as cute as the lot of you by comparison.
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Just as they say that too much red meat is bad, even though Fred Flintstone insisted and I quote,
Come to think of it, this movie is the 74th in the list of the 100 Scariest Movie Moments having a scene during the tunnel part.
Wizard of Oz is the 86th.
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Surprisingly I never found the tunnel scene scary as a child nor the Wizard of oz either I guess I enjoyed the 🎥 so much I didn't noticed
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It is a bit ironic when we consider that both these movies were nominated for scenes that had the scariest film moments. Of course, being so low on the list, we can't say they were 'that' scary for viewers. Sure the tunnel scene is a little creepy and the Wicked Witch is not one to look at, but after years seeing the movies multiple times it kind of numbs off after a while.
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Great commentary by the Equestrians!
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Why, thank you! Thought I'd have the Cutie Mark Crusaders (Discord included) and some other foals sit and watch the film.
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I cant wait for their reactions to the other three ticket finders!
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You'll see that commentary once their respective parts come up!
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Hopefully it won't take too long for those parts to come out. We want the next few chapters to be extra special for our fans, but so far we have to wait until Mr. Enigma informs the staff what he has in mind for the story.
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Would you like some help I can be good with collaborating on ideas
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I prefer working with the administration team, as it gives me confidence is put in 'capable' hands. While I do appreciate the offer, we have all the help that we need.
So where's the new chapter? I thought it was going to be updated.