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I am new at fanfictions, but I really enjoy writing so here goes nothing!


What happens when an unexpected visit turns into a disaster? This is a sequel to Big Macilicious, so read that one first, if you haven't already. :D

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 39 )

Well, I certainly didn't see this coming.

And I was oh so close to hitting the hay.

Meh, sleep is for squares.

Time to read! :pinkiehappy:

This, children, is why you knock before entering a room. Especially one that has a "Do not Disturb" sign on the door.

Big Mac's blushing too, you just can't tell because he's already red. :twilightblush:

I would apperciate longer chapters, but i still enjoy reading them

Sorry. I think I might have a touch of ADD. It's really hard for me to sit there long enough to write anything over 1200 words. :applejackunsure:


I usually don't write an entire chapter in one sitting. Well, okay, I used to, but I've found that that tends to lead to rushing. And when you're writing, rushing is bad.

Yeah, I'd like to do it that way, but if I press 'publish' it allows everyone to see it. I type it right into the editing box.


I use Microsoft Word, then copy-past it into the editing box. This can be a little tricky sometimes. See, I also post my fanfic on DeviantART, and DeviantART uses the standard HTML tag system for bold and italics (with these: < >), but this site uses normal square brackets ( [ ] ). It can sometimes slip through.

1132320 or you could try doing it in gdocs. I haven't written any fics, but I proofread and beta? for Kriegor's Machine and Might using it, and it's quite nice.


I absolutely loved Big Macalicious! I cannot wait to get started on this :D :eeyup:

Twilight Gets à big sister:rainbowlaugh:

how long before we blast cadence too?

Wow, today's just full of surprise updates from my favorites list, isn't it?

As for the chapter... I sense much hilarity ensuing.

Though, frankly, what keeps a pony affected by the spell from affecting everypony around them?

...Oh, dear lord, I don't think I want to think about that.

XD Heh, it's okay. But magic is only so strong. It needs direct physical contact, even the strongest spells, to be passed on. :twilightsmile: Otherwise, yeah, Ponyville would go to hell in a handbasket. XD

1858811As a stallion I think it would actually be Prince Lunar.

1859022 I really prefer Lucien, but that's a bit obscure.

I want to see Celstia's reaction. It would be even better for Gleaming shield if it was the first day of spring, or heat for mares. Or hat if Twilight was hit by an anvil from Ditzy and was in a coma for ten days!? Awesome...

I believe the fanon name is Prince Artemis, but I'm not positive.

1859039 I guess Artemis could work since its a gender-less name.

Lol hmm I wonder If we are going to see A sister missile instead of a wife missile. Yeh I would've threw my sister pretty far if she did that to me while laughing histarcally. Then maybe done a rarity duck face :duck: before prancing away to flirt with Donut Joe to get free donuts. You know cus all royal guards love donuts lol. :trollestia:

Is this still going? It seems to have stopped.

Or maybe it's just me being impatient. :pinkiecrazy:


This should be interesting. If it's still going, that is.

His mane grew out, getting longer and his eyes suddenly sprouted eyelashes.

I hate to break it to you, but he already had eyelashes, they just aren't very pronounced.

Well, that was an interesting way to start the story.

Christ, Shining. You have a sister. You should know better than to barge into a mare's room without knocking.

... On the other hand, it's hard to imagine Twilight really helped instill that lesson.

He paused to say a quick hello to Cadence before continuing on his way out of the castle.

Judging by the apparent haste in which he moved from boning a Princess to leaving the hall, I can only assume he was still touting an erection the entire time he was leaving the castle.
Like a bawss.

"That's right", Twilight answered promptly. And then the terrible, terrible truth began to dawn on her too. "Oh. My. Celestia. Princess Luna."

Oh, please. She got a lot more from Mac that just some magic runoff.

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