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After having lunch with A.K Yearling, Rainbow becomes interested in trying to write a book. About herself and her teammates, what they're like when they're not performing. She creates chapters that share anecdotes of her team, all taking place in her daily life. Because with her team, every day's a new dramatic adventure. After all, no one has ever seen the Wonderbolts from the other side of the flight suit.

This story is a semi-sequel to Ex-Bolt's Rising by Melody Song. This is an adopted fic, so the first 8 chapters are by her. I will be writing the remaining chapters starting with chapter 9.

Edit 3/7/21: this story is now on hiatus, reason is detailed here

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 16 )

Interesting. Very interesting. This is a promising start.
I love the characterization in this and how well developed they seem to already be.
In the show, the relationship between dash and the wonderbolts is never really explored, so I love it when stories come along and flesh it out.
Not to mention dash is writing the book! Knowing dash, this will either end amazingly or absolutely awful:rainbowlaugh:.
And I like that daring also seems like she’s willing to help write it too. That’ll be fun.
Overall this story seems to have a lot of potential and I will be watching to see where this goes.:trixieshiftright:

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Thanks for the nice comment, and you're right, Daring will occasionally be mentioned as Rainbow consulting her. But Rainbow will also find help in...well, you'll see.:raritywink:

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Not to mention dash is writing the book! Knowing dash, this will either end amazingly or absolutely awful.

Bits on the latter. If you were talking about the body of the story, bits on the former.

Only the 1st chapter and already it’s hilarious. LOL

I’m definitely looking forward to more than f this

Rainbow Dash isn't writing what's essentially poorly-written self-insert fanfiction? I'm surprised.

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Not really considering most of the stories of her writing self-insert fanfictions are fanfictions themselves, so it's a matter of how you choose to write her character.

Good story, added to my read list.

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Cool, thanks for the support. :twilightsmile:

Nice update. Really enjoying the story. :twilightsmile:

I love it! Just read all your stories out of my love for changelings and wonderbolts :pinkiehappy: Waiting for more!

Comment posted by Sunlight Blast deleted Nov 30th, 2020
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