"They are rage, brutal, without mercy." Gann snarled in anger and lifted Luna by the chain, somewhat choking the alicorn "B-but he is w-worse...

Here we go...

Not bad. I did notice a few typos here and there, so you might want to give it another pass.

Good first chapter, hope for more later.

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Will do

Once again the Caribou are villainized... And once more I couldn't give less of a shit.

A displaced fic?

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Nope... no comic-con or shady merchant round' these parts

Cry havoc and let slip the dogs of war.

* malevolently chuckle* your rage and hatred shall bring forth the great wave of blood, show no mercy to those who sold their souls to damnation, be their executioner, bathe your hand in their blood mortal. Rip and tear.

That some nice start of the story you did. Hehe. Only the craziest and harden mare can win a hellwalker heart, and Luna apparently succeed in winning him, how did that happen?. I shall stay tuned for the chapter of this story.

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Ahhhh booooo those are always the most fun!

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But in any case

RIP AND TEAR UNTIL IT IS DONE!!!!!!
RIP AND TEAR UNTIL IT IS DONE!!!!!!
RIP AND TEAR UNTIL IT IS DONE!!!!!!
RIP AND TEAR UNTIL IT IS DONE!!!!!!
RIP AND TEAR UNTIL IT IS DONE!!!!!!
RIP AND TEAR UNTIL IT IS DONE!!!!!!
RIP AND TEAR UNTIL IT IS DONE!!!!!!
RIP AND TEAR UNTIL IT IS DONE!!!!!!

They opened the gate and ushered their own doom inside...and now fire, fury and gore shall be all that is left in his wake UNLEASH THE DOOM SLAYER!

I will be watching this...with great interest.

*another fic were the caribou get brutally slaughtered by the doom slayer*

HOW MANY TIMES MUST WE TEACH YOU THIS LESSON OLD MAN

Still a great start by the way

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Just some weird cyborg man who teleported the last hope for life in case the demons go at it again, right?

Oooh, a new Doom crossover. Awesome. This should be a fun read, seeing how he will liberate Equestria, and i bet unintentionally become the new king. He is already apparantly Luna's husband, and i honestly won't be surprised if the other three alicorns end up with some infatuation for him.
Even if those last two things don't happen still looking forward to seeing how this goes.

What happened to the rest of the main 6?

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No. The Slayer is much much worse than that. He is the manifestation of Rage itself. He gains strength from those he kills. Hell itself fears him and has tried endlessly to kill him without Success. Demons taller than skyscrapers have been sent after him only to die by his hands.

He is The Slayer. And the Caribou have harmed his wife. May the gods have mercy on their souls. For He has none to give.

Ok so I have a problem with the Slayer speaking in fics, but you made a speaking slayer that doesn’t retract from what the doom slayer is. Upvote from me

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Well, I can't just reveal everything in a single chapter, right?

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His fists and guns do most of the talking anyway

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He has lots of bullets to give though. That's at least something, right?

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Probably dead or slaves, as it was said, all of Equestria was taken over by those murderers and rapers

OOOOOOO THIS MAKES ME HAPPY!!!! DIE.....DOOMGUY IN EQUESTRIA!!!!!!!

Already have eternal pre-ordered
Hope it comes with a steelbook

This just made me grin a grin scarier than the combination of The Grinch and The Cryptkeeper. And I think this would also be a good theme song for The Rebellion. That said, it's time to Fight Like Hell.

Actually, I think this would be a good theme song for the Doom Slayer. I wonder if one of the men in the Rebellion who sings as a hobby would make this song?

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It's even more stupid what people do with them when you remember that caribou never even existed in Friendship is Magic.

Ah, another one.

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I bow to your masterpiece, Yoshikage-san.

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No need, you make your own mark.

Besides, I was going to do a different story after Eternal comes out.

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Awwww yeah! Can't wait!

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Tell that to the one who created fall of equestria, people have different types of imagination going on in their head.

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I think there's a special edition with the steelbook and one with a friggin' helmet!

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Basically, someone made a "villian" species that everyone uses in their stories as antagonists. 🤷

Not bad. I'll see how this goes when the game comes out and see how this will play out.

Here's some atmospheric music to go with this fic.

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YEEEEESSSSSSSS!

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... I was talking about how Hayden sent him away, but okay.

So what do you want to know of the lore codex of Doom Eternal.

Well that was.....please continue.

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blood marine
Hey! Where is the blood in thy words?! Where is thy Red, bloody, RAGE

This, was, PERFECT, I look forward to MUCH more,
And now as a side note,
RIP AND TEAR UNTIL ITS DONE!

Yes... BLOOD!!! GORE!!! VENGEANCE!!!!!

Could use a heavy metal music while reading this but meanwhile

RIP AND TEAR

Ooooooooohhhhh, yeeeeeeeessssss. It is... Beautiful. We... We must, must. Rip and Tear, Rip and Tear, Rip and Tear,RIP AND TEAR! AHHHHAHAHAHAHAHAH! KILL THEM ALL!!!

I hate this purely on the basis that it acknowledges the existence of that which should be left forgotten.

A little short, a little quick, and a little bereft of description. I dont know if I'd even bother writing another chapter if I were you. The story is more or less over at this point. The only dangling plot thread left is saving Celestia but even then you've proven that the slayer could just walk in without resistance. Other then that there is no mystery, or character development needed. This story is complete.

There are multiple typos in the fic description.

Perhaps the Caribou should've headed this:

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Which would be?

Powered by an unknown source of magic and aided by monsters not even Nightmare Moon herself could conjure, the Caribou laid waste to Equestria and clamied it's mares for their own.

Claimed