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Gearsmash King


My problem is I have way too many ideas.

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It's been six years since the girls of CHS graduated. But, they never lost touch with each other. Except for one.

After a deal gone wrong, she's come home. But, what is following her? And can she ask for help from the only ones she can trust?

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 16 )

You got me interested. Now make this into a good story. And consider this story as tracked and liked. :twilightsmile:

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I'll do my best. Thanks. :twilightsmile:

Nice job giving me insight into how the others are doing. Nice buildup chapter, overall. :pinkiesmile:

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Thanks. I thought I was dragging it out a bit, but I'm glad you like it. :twilightsmile:

Not bad, I'd say. Although the way Fluttershy acted towards Sunset threw me off a bit at first, it was understandable. I mean, I would be very "peeved" :flutterrage: if one of my best friends went dark for six years before showing up without a single notice.
Want to see where this goes from here. Keep up the good work.

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Thanks. I was aiming for a somewhat realistic approach. Rather than have them forgive Sunset right off the bat.

Nice chapter, I'm pretty hooked on this story, really want to see the mystery unfold.

Looks like a good chapter to me. Can't wait to see what the next chapter will show. Good job! :pinkiehappy:

Another good chapter. Relaxing, yet full of context. I like this story so far.

Terribly sorry for your loss, take all the time you need for this story

Why isn't there a dark tag?

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When I originally started this, I didn't think I'd take it this far. But, now that you mention it, maybe I should add that.

"Look at this. Hundred million, forty million, three million... All in the span of three months.

Depending on the company, that could be considered petty cash for the major ones ...

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Perhaps. But, it's more so the fact that it's being spent without permission.

Saber seethed through gritted teeth, "Everything I've been doing has been for the benefit of the family and humanity!"

Oh, so she's one of those ones, huh?
I don't see this ending well for her, or anyone involved in her little... whatever "Project Nexus" is.
*pauses, then :facehoof:*
"Project Nexus".
The idiots are gonna try to open a portal, or something, aren't they?
Stay safe, Twilight.
But I think Sunset and the rest of the Cavalry are coming to the rescue, in any case.

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Perhaps. But, it's more so the fact that it's being spent without permission.

Hmmm, don't think so, it more along the lines of without an explanation (or an acceptable end goal), though permission would have helped ...

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