The plot thickens, and I like what you included in this chapter, certainly sets it further apart from Overlord

Hmm looks promising, let's see what's it all about

Welp gotta admit story's great, granted there are mistakes and gramma errors here and there but overall it's a very good story. Not much more i can say - not enough material to write a proper opinion,
So all that's left is add it into tracked along with favorites lists and await the next chapter

What are the characters alignments?

Its utterly hilarious that someone not half their level was able to clear Odin's Reach before they did. I can only imagine the reaction when the find out.

I've gotta say it's extremely off-putting to try and read this..... "L0rd0f7hunder" name while in this story format, especially since this is no longer a game world. Like how the hell would you even say it? Like I know it means "LordOfThunder" but having the characters in this story say it as "L0rd0f7hunder" while speaking is extremely weird.

Just a criticism, but aside from that I'm enjoying this story immensely.