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Zontan


Nitpicking your math errors is how I show I care.

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It's been a long time since Fluttershy was afraid to venture into the Everfree Forest. When Rarity needs star spider silk for Twilight's coronation dress, she's happy to help. All it will take is a simple trip into the secluded grove they call home.


Second place in Quills and Sofas Speedwriting's Spookfest contest.

CW: Spiders. Lots of spiders.

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Comments ( 7 )

Loved this during the contest and love it now too!
It's an interesting kind of horror story, throughout the piece I'd say the tension level is pretty low since it always seems like FS has a handle on the situation. Far from being a detriment, this only serves to make the ending that much better.
The rug pulled from under you effect is very well done, and I'm really glad you added in the bit about the stare too.
Nice work mate! :twilightsmile:

Welp, I ain’t goin’ to bed tonight...

Spiders don't scare me at all. I think they're cute! So the ending really surprised me.
Well done

If you're afraid of spiders, you're the one in the wrong and need to fix yourself. Even here, too many ponies are traveling into the Everfree at this point and some push back is both right and justified.

I really do like the bluntness of this story. Very old school.

I like what you did with my prompt.

Did Fluttershy die? Did she get eaten?

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