I don't know if you can add this to the story in some way but:

Spike technically outranks Ember, for the soul fact that if it wasn't for Spike, Ember wouldn't be Dragon lord, so technically Spikes word overrules Embers and she has to do whatever he tells her to do.

Can you see if you can Integrate elements of this fact in some way.

I don't know if anyone has acknowledged this fact in any of their stories

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I never thought of that before, but there is a problem here. He give up the title, meaning that he would no more rank then any former ruler over an active ruler. Anyway I don't think I can really use it for what I'm doing but it is something to think of

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It's cool, just an idea that people could add to their stories that have both Spike and Ember.

The D&D references are perfect for this story And make it much more interesting in my opinion

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Thank you

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Your welcome