• Published 15th Feb 2020
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A Brush With Fate - RadBunny



"I just want to help." It was a simple voicing of concerns about the Lunar Princess. Steel Heart had no idea such a request would turn his life upside down in more ways than one, let alone almost give him a concussion.

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Chapter Eight: Dancing in Moonlight

The stallion stared at the newspaper article in absolute shock, the large, enchanted letter and enclosed paper having arrived only an hour after he awoke for the evening.

Tears trickled down Steel’s cheeks- but not in sadness. Luck, Chance…those held no sway to the timing of this.

The letter was a simple message from his mother, tears on the paper as her shaky script had been written.

‘Please read. Your father, he’s back.
My Pen Heart is back. I ask you give him a chance.’

The article had been read by Steel twice already, and a third time caused a long-forgotten sense of pride to be kindled. Small and easily doused, but flickering.

His mother’s words that his father had been changing had not been unfounded, it would seem.

‘Political powerhouse and construction tycoon Pen Heart delivered an explosive announcement today. The pony who had pledged most of his fortune into building one of the most successful political campaign engines and construction companies had this to say about his immediate actions, the stallion looking ragged after two weeks of sparse contact with the media.’

The enchanted picture, a simple black and white recording to save magical power now played, the audio grainy but very understandable. Steel’s father stood on the steps of one of his office buildings, jaw quivering as he waved a hoof at the structure.

“You- yes you, what did you say?” Pen asked, a reporter voicing the question again.

“Are you really throwing all of this progress away? This empire?”

Pen stared, the proud stallion then hanging his head.
“Is this what progress is?” he asked, then looking up at the gathering of surprised media ponies.

“My children won’t speak to me. My wife says she’d give anything to have me back to how I used to be, the deaths of innocent ponies on my conscience…is that what progress is?!” he asked, glaring at the reported before shaking his head.

“I’ve lost everything that matters in this life, all for what. Concrete and glass? Political sway?” he paused.

“Then I will tear it down; I can’t live like this. My son was right, I did become one of them,” Pen whispered. “I’m out. No more campaigns, and I’m selling my shares of the company. The public won’t notice a difference, only that there will be less of me. I’ve lost everything that drove me to even be successful. If I ever enter the business world again, it will be a small shop on a side street. But even that…I’m done.’ Pen got up and began to trot away from the media gaggle, then pausing once again.

“To everycreature that has been hurt by my negligence, I’ll make it right. I have to.”

The video then ended, Steel staring at the article in disbelief.

Perhaps I shall write him indeed. No later than after my date. Perhaps Luna can give me some guidance.
Or a hug.


Luna clopped her hooves together excitedly, nerves making her nearly vibrate with tension.
Good tension, deep breaths.
Bad tension.
ALL the tension!

As Steel *popped* into existence at her side on their designated hill, courtesy of an enchanted amulet, Luna’s ears flicked in thought. Something was troubling him, and that made her nerves fray.

Should I ask him tonight?

I don’t want him to-

*Boop*

Luna went cross-eyed at the hoof on her nose, shoulders then relaxing as a simple, chaste but affectionate kiss was planted on her lips by her special somepony.

“You are one distracted mare, what’s up?” Steel asked, sitting down and placing a picnic basket to the side.

“I was going to say the same thing about you,” she mumbled. “Are you sure you-Mmmmmmm.”

Steel was clearly enjoying the fact he could incapacitate the Lunar Princess with a kiss, grinning dopily as Luna pouted.

“That,” she grumbled, poking his chest lightly with a hoof, “is not fair!”

“Never said it is! But what is on your mind? I do have something to talk about, but not until you tell me your troubles,” he then paused, “and I won’t budge on that. You know I won’t.”

The ultimate pout of all pouts failed to break through Steel’s demeanor, Luna smiling finally as she scooted closer to rest on the stallion’s shoulder.

“Alright. It’s, well, the thing. The big thing.”

“The thing? OH! Are you sure?”

Luna nodded, taking a deep breath to quell the butterflies in her stomach. The fear was rising- she had to speak soon.

“Will you promise to answer honestly? The first thing that comes to mind?” Luna whispered, almost pleading. Her heart fluttered as Steel nodded immediately.

“I promise.”

She paused, her sister’s words giving her much-needed reassurance to continue on.

“Would not aging or dying be a horrible fate? For you that is?” she finally whispered, not as a direct method of question as Luna would like, but it worked.

Steel’s brow furrowed, the stallion thinking for a moment.

“I think it would be pretty awful, if I’m honest-” his words were cut off by Luna taking in a sharp, unconscious breath, ears flattening as a lump welled up in her throat. Steel immediately scooted closer, gently placing a hoof on her chest with an affectionate smile.

“Hey, I wasn’t finished,” he said softly, gaze meeting Luna’s. While her eyes brimmed with tears, his own shone with a sincere care, the embers of love flickering brightly, the stallion clearly understanding the deeper, unspoken weight of her question. “I was trying to say, it’d be pretty awful unless I had someone at my side forever.”

Now the tears fell from Luna’s eyes, her fears being shattered with Steel’s words.

“R-really?” she managed to whisper, her coltfriend nodding.

“Really. It’s a bit early to be making that jump, if I’m being honest,” he admitted, “but the idea? The possibility? It’s not that bad of an idea at all, as long as I’m not alone.”

“Can I-Just….you….hug?” Luna stammered, Steel wrapping his hooves around the Princess as she fell into his arms. Her sides shook with sobs, pend up fear and tension now released as tears coursed down her cheeks.

“Steel, thank you. I was so scared, just, thank you.” she whispered, Steel rubbing her back gently.

“No thanks are necessary. I can tell this has been quite a weight, but I’m glad you asked me. It’s a bit early to be considering all of that, but I can see why you asked now, at least from my perspective,” he mused. “Then again, if my answer had been different, that may have changed things, huh?”

She nodded, holding him a bit tighter.

“I don’t know if I could do it.” Luna whispered. “Falling in love to know you would….”

Her words were stopped by a gentle touch, Steel reaching up and caressing her cheek with his.

“Well, you don’t have to worry about that. How about we explore this option more after a bunch more dates though? Just know that I don’t hate the idea at all. In fact, I think it could be quite fun. It’s just a bit overwhelming.”

Luna nodded in agreement, blushing as Steel reached up to wipe her eyes for her.

“You are far too much a gentlecolt,” she said, the stallion standing tall with a grin.

“Yup!”

Spreading out the contents of the picnic basket, Luna looked over to see Steel fishing out a simple, enchanted parchment and pen, the alicorn gesturing curiously.

“What are those for?”

Hoofing over the article regarding his family, Steel waited until Luna had read it, her eyes widening in absolute shock.

“He has changed quite a bit it would seem…” Luna mused. “I am surprised.”

“You and me both,” Steel agreed, levitating the parchment over, on which was written a brief message. “But your question kind of put mine in perspective, of whether to speak with my father again.”

Luna read the parchment, warmth welling up in her heart at the simple words.

‘Hey dad,

I saw your article, and what you said.
I’d like to meet with you and mom, and maybe the whole family if we can wrangle them back together for a dinner.
I’ve had things put in perspective recently, and I’d like to keep in touch with my parents more often once again, if that is something you’d like.

-Steel Heart.’

Steel read over the message and promptly sent the message with a tap of his hoof, the parchment vanishing with a magical fizzle.

“Well, he can reply to that if he wants. But I don’t know how he’ll react,” the stallion admitted with a shrug, a smile spreading on his face regardless. “But I’ve spent far too long harboring negative feelings for him. Justified or not…I want to focus on better things.”

Steel reached over and held Luna’s hoof, the alicorn blushing as he gave it a kiss.

“Much, much better things,” he added, the Princess not able to restrain a laugh.

“That was so cheesy. I love it,” she giggled.

Steel’s attention was then drawn to a familiar parchment, the item reappearing with a soft chime.

“Huh…” he muttered, angling it so Luna could read as well.

‘Son,

I’d like nothing more than for that to happen, and I hope in time you can forgive me for what I became, for what I am struggling to retreat from.
Is it too late to say I’m sorry?

Because I am so, so sorry for what I did, for what I became, for my actions…for everything.’

Luna saw Steel’s jaw clench, the sensitive stallion’s hooves shivering slightly. She reached over to hold one of them gently as he scrawled a brief reply. The words made Luna’s heart soar, both out of pride and affection.

‘It is never too late, dad.

And I have forgiven you.
When we meet, there’s a pony I’d like to introduce you to as well. It’s only right that a stallion introduces his marefriend to his father and mother.’

Sending the message away, Steel took a few deep breaths, sniffling slightly.

“It took a good year or two for me to realize it,” he whispered, “to forgive him for acting so selfishly. But seeing the continued toll it took, how he always regretted it after realizing how his actions affected others…I had to forgive him. If not for his sake, then for mine. Until now he never really acted to show a change.”

The reply was nearly immediate- and a single damp drop now sullied the ink on the message.

‘I’d like nothing more, Son.
Thank you.’

“I’m proud of you, Steel,” Luna whispered, her stallion smiling.

“Thank you, Luna. It has been a journey for both of us it would seem.”

“Indeed.”

Content to snuggle with his marefriend for a few more moments, Steel then stood up and stretched, retrieving a familiar item as he nudged Luna’s shoulder with his own.

“I think we have a date to continue? Well, for tonight,” he stated, twirling the plush brush above his head proudly. “And many more dates after that!”

His proud and confident statement immediately had Luna smiling widely, retrieving her own dueling implement and crossing it with his.

“You seem so sure of such dates!” she teased, Steel smirking as he walked forwards slowly. When he was but a hairs breath from Luna’s face, he leaned in even closer.

“Am I wrong?” he whispered in a rather sultry tone, Luna blushing and starting to stammer.

“I-you…”

A brief kiss cut off her words, the stallion happily trotting a short distance away and lowering himself into a dueling stance.

“I never did get your answer!” Steel called back as Luna attacked, whacking him with a brush and receiving a blow in return, squeaks from the plushies ringing out across the otherwise peaceful bay.

Darting forwards, Luna ducked a swipe from Steel’s brush, the stallion tripping over his own hooves to backpedal and ending up on his back. Luna held her brush handle-down to point at Steel’s neck, sides heaving with exertion as she grinned.

“I…win…” she panted, Steel throwing a hoof across his brow.

“I am bested!” he called out, letting out a happy hum as Luna settled down in the thick grass next to him. She reached over and nuzzled against his neck, her touch then tracing up to lock her lips with his in an increasingly affectionate gesture, a hoof wrapping around to hug her stallion close.

As they parted, Steel had that increasingly lovable, dopey grin on his face while Luna rested her forehead against his.

“I’m so glad you were brushed into my life,” she whispered, Steel immediately laughing as he gave her a kiss.

“That makes it sound like a much gentler meeting than it was!” he teased, hopping up and batting her with a familiar implement.

“IT WAS AN ACCIDENT!” Luna called, chasing her coltfriend down the hill with her brush.

“YOU GAVE ME A CONCUSSION!”

“’TWAS ALMOST A CONCUSSION!”

“IT STILL HURT!”

*THWACK!*

“…Steel?”

“Ow…”

“I’m impressed, you snapped that tree branch in half.”

“That’s what it was?”

“Indeed. Let’s get that bump looked at.”

The pair meandered back to their hill, Steel nursing a fresh goose-egg on his forehead but still able to grin, leaning on her marefriend.

“Kiss to make it better?”

A combing implement was immediately deployed by the Lunar Princess in response.

*SQUEAK!*

Of course, the following kiss did make it much, much better.

The End.

Author's Note:

And thus ends the adorable tale of Luna and Steel. This was a fun short to write- very different from my other stories. I hope everyone enjoyed this fluff-filled jaunt, and hope to see you during another tale! A Cure For A Toxin is the current on-going story.

Credit for the jumping-off idea of course goes to the artist Yakovlev-Vad on deviantart! He's been very supportive of both this story and letting me use art for some of my other pieces.

-Radbunny

Comments ( 88 )

part of me wants an excerpt of his parents reaction to there son datign the princess of night

10187901
I vote with you. another chapter or two would be nice.

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Me three!~

Loved it! Only minor mistake is in the chapter title.

10188218
How.
HOW did I miss that?!?!
YIKES.
But fixed. Thank you! Funny enough, it actually still worked as a chapter title :rainbowlaugh:

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10187901
I've considered it but the scene just didn't feel substantive enough, and may come off as forced.

This was really fun.
Thoroughly enjoyed all the boops to the head and the fluff as always.
Kinda sad to see it end but its better to have a good ending then a drawn out one for the sake of views.

Fluff/10

10188222
Aah alright, non the less this was a fantastic story, I excited to see where Cure for a Toxin leads us.

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ALL THE FLUFF!
And that's what it comes down to. I never intended it to be that long of a story, so anything past this point would be rather forced, and I think that'd bleed through in terms of quality.

10188547
I hope you enjoy it! But yeah, this story was never meant to be long, so any future chapters would be 100% outside what I originally planned, and suffer in quality, I think.

This was a fun little story :twilightsmile:

That was the fluffiest thing I've read in a while. Thanks for writing this, I can say I thoroughly enjoyed Luna and Steel's interactions.. Also, congrats to Celestia as well, of course.

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Most welcome, it was a fun fluff filled short! A bit different than other stories I've written, but a joy to write nonetheless!

Hope we someday get a '5 years later' bonus chapter.

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One word
YES!
Tho as he said anything after this point be rather forced but that would be very nice to see at some point

This was a Very good story and a absolutely a favorite of mine and I loved it all, all of the FLUFF!

10189874
All the fluff!
And as I've stated, it would be 100% forced and made up on the fly, as I never intended to go beyond this point.

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Yeah, kinda sad because it would have been awesome to see his families reaction to Luna being his marefriend but this is a fine ending, look forward to reading more of timeless.
Oh and because of this story I actually made a new bookshelf called 'Realm of favorites and this is number one

10189986
Aye, I toyed with the idea, but it ultimately just didn't fit with the tone I wanted to set.
Oh? I'm honored! :yay:

10189995
Okay, And you're welcome bud

Dang, this was a beautiful fluffy jaunt for my eyeballs and my heart. It went out but with a whimper, but a *SQUEAK* :heart:

Still would have liked a final reconciliation with Steel's family, after we got such a heartfelt inclusion of them.

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I'm glad you enjoyed it! :yay:
I have toyed with the idea; but ultimately it felt like such an inclusion would have fallen flat, simply because I didn't have enough substance around it.

*THWACK!*

“…Steel?”

“Ow…”

“I’m impressed, you snapped that tree branch in half.”

Headline: Palace Official Charged With Domestic Abuse

Anonymous sources inside the Canterlot Royal Palace today have revealed to the press that Princess Celestia has overseen the unusually rapid trial and sentencing of an unnamed government official accused of physically abusing her coltfriend. Details are sparse, but all sources confirm that the poor stallion was treated by the palace infirmary on multiple occasions for head trauma, and most recently for the removal of bits of a tree branch from his hide. One source close to the princess admitted that the sentence meted out by our beloved leader was most shocking and harsh, especially given the source: a full two weeks without cake, and the offender may be magically bound to serve as her victim's personal maid and gofer until such time as palace medical officers determine that a full recovery has been made.


In other news, a new fashion is sweeping the capital, as Princess Luna has been spotted wearing an unusual accessory. That's right, ponies: collars are in vogue in Canterlot this season...<continued on page C12>

Fluffy fluffy fluff fluff. Fluff is the fluffiest fluff to ever fluff. Did I mention I really like fluff? Especially puppies. Fluffy fluff fluff.

Heh, fluff is a strange word. Ever notice how seeing or hearing a word multiple times makes it seem weird?

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ALL HAIL FLUFF!:pinkiehappy: I think every one of my stories has fluff in some regard. The one I'm currently writing....oooooh the fluff that awaits.
And yes...it's an odd phenomenon.

That was adorable and I want more.

Huk

I finally got some time to read the entire thing, and I must say I deeply enjoyed it. May give some more romance stories a shot after that one.

The fluff was adorable, make me wonder how relatable that stuff was to real life :unsuresweetie:.

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:yay: It was a blast to write.

And relatable? Well, all depends on the individual I'd say.

Had to keep reading and finish the story. Really enjoyed reading it and it was simply sweet. Also, I think I do get to say that I called it, though not in the manner I expected to where they actually turned the whole brush thing into a harmless game. However, one thing above stood out to me in this chapter:

And I have forgiven you. When we meet, there’s a pony I’d like to introduce you to as well. It’s only right that a stallion introduces his marefriend to his father and mother.’

Someone either conveniently or mischievously forgot to mention that said "marefriend" is the Princess of the Night, Luna. I can only imagine the shocked looks and awkward exchanges when the two of them walk through the door at the family gathering and he introduces Luna as his marefriend.

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:pinkiehappy: I'm so glad you enjoyed it! It really was a thrill to write!

Oh, Steel wouldn't be THAT cheeky. Oh no, he'd neeeeeeever :rainbowlaugh:

Great story! Would love to see a continuation of this.

Fluffy goodness

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:pinkiehappy:
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Glad you enjoyed it!

I'm not crying... I'm not...
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I'M SO HAPPY RIGHT NOW!
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Back... I'm back. Wow, two comments in one night? Man, someone would think you managed to impress me with your writing or something...
All jokes aside... partly-maybe-not-so, I'm so happy to have read this story. Along with your other ones, they've seriously touched my life in a very good way. I stumbled across you for the first time about half a year ago, I was just browsing through this site, looking for something to read, when I came across a little gem known as Streams of Silver, Hearts of Gold. Maybe you've heard of it? I dunno, wild guess. Then imagine my surprise and delight to see a complete sequel to thag story! It was the highlight of my week that time, just knowing I could come home from work to an incredible story about love, sacrifice, honor and friendship. Around that time, I was starting to have a... let's go with "strained" relationship with my step father, and I would often retreat into your stories. (I read the GallusStream saga about five times in two weeks... lots of late nights I'm not ashamed to admit)
It really helped deal with stress. In any case, that led me to your other stories, and eventually to this one. Which I started reading around the same time I moved out of my step father's home. I was 17 at the time... not that I'm much older now, but I'm technically a legal adult at this point so... retrospect?
Regardless. I'm very glad I found you around that rocky period of my life. But! I haven't even talked about this chapter yet... and started rambling as I tend to do. So! Omward!
"EEEEEEEEEEEEEEHHHHHHH!"
Was pretty much my entire thought process through all of this chapter. I'm a real sucker for adorable, genuine relationships inside of stories. And especially quote unquote "mushy" scenes.
I LOVE MUSHY THINGS!
And this chapter delivered in that regards. Not only did we get a touching scene between Luna and Steel... we got to see him reconcile with his father, and maybe even bring his family back togather. His entire family... including Luna.
(Yes, I know that wasn't confirmed... technically. Buy I can totally see it happening, darn it! Also... well, my headcanons are creating alternate timelines anyway, so IT'S HAPPENED SOMEWHERE!)
I'm so happy right now... I can't even express it in words. Thank you, Rad. Thank you for this gem, and all of your other treasures. I'll likely reread your stories again and again. Just... thank you...
And now, for one last time inside of this particular story.
*Inhales deeply*
Pause for dramatic effect...
ONWARD AND UPWARD!

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All I can say I can say is that I'm overjoyed to hear that my stories have been a bright point in your life. I stumbled upon MLP during a darker point of my own life, so to hear that some of my works can be that light...well, thank YOU for the comment, I sincerely hope things continue to look up for you :pinkiehappy: I'm so very glad they were a positive influence =)

"I'm a real sucker for adorable, genuine relationships inside of stories. And especially quote unquote "mushy" scenes."
To that end.....I can't wait for my current story (Cure for a Toxin) to progress a bit more. It has some darker moments than my other pieces, but counterbalanced with some rather intricate/complicated relationships.
And fluff.
So much fluff.
Perhaps I'll see you there- but if not, I'm so very glad these stories were able to bring you some joy. :twilightsmile:

10226923
You can count on me being there!
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Just as soon as I catch up. I also still need to read Sunspots. But I'll catch up.

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:yay:
Oh that's a fun adventure as well. The fluff train continues!

this fic was soo good that i might have fall in love with the fic

This was adorable in the way it ended, the last two chapters kind of skipped by me and I didn't notice them in my update feed. As a dumb little question was there any plan of having a face-to-face with Steels father? It would have been interesting to have that kind of closure rather than just a few messages between them before ending the story, also his father realizing that his son is dating Princess Luna would have been fun to see.

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Glad you enjoyed it! And no plans for that are in the works. It seemed like a logical progression but just didn't really fit, and ultimately (in my opinion) may have come off as forced unless I wrote it right.

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I've had a few users comment on that very thing, and I DID consider it, but it almost seemed trite, and better to leave it to the imagination.

I found this to be a lovely & charming story. I'm a sucker for romance stories and this one pushed all the right buttons with me. Thank you for creating and sharing.

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I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Writing this was a definite shift from my other stories, and I'm just happy it turned out so well (and so many people liked it!) If fluffy romance is your thing, the current story I'm working on has it aplenty! A very different tone though. This was a definitely fun, lighthearted write.

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Oh wow, I'm honored! Thank you! :pinkiehappy:

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Atomic or Hydrogen?

A: smaller explosion, lasting radiation.

H: larger explosion, less radiation.

In all seriousness, I loved this story, it feels like a real love story forged through tears, laughter, and mutual affection between two star-crossed lovers.

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