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Princess Luna is having a great Nightmare Night and when going to Sweet Apple Acres she meets Flutterbat, who is back for apples. Luna doesn't want Applejacks apples to be all gone so she decides to spend time with Flutterbat to get to know her and make sure she doesn't do any harm. While she is hanging out with Flutterbat she realizes that she really enjoys her a lot but she may never find somepony as great as her again.

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Don't forget commas before your end quotation marker.

This could be really interesting, but it's extremely rushed and could definitely use a read-through. I'd recommend this group:
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/97/looking-for-editors
If you get an editor, let me know! I'd love to read this story. :twilightsmile:

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