Rarity has always been an artist. Even now, she can't resist the urge to create new masterpieces. If only she had someone to show them to.
Second place in the Quills and Sofas Speedwriting Colorful Characters: Rarity contest.
Nitpicking your math errors is how I show I care.
Rarity has always been an artist. Even now, she can't resist the urge to create new masterpieces. If only she had someone to show them to.
Second place in the Quills and Sofas Speedwriting Colorful Characters: Rarity contest.
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This is such a touching piece. It presents itself in such an understated but affecting way. The end is particularly strong as well. You're probably sick of seeing me talk about endings that don't overstay their welcome and this is definitely one. It leaves off at the perfect place, giving a satisfying ending that doesn't need to over-explain itself.
Really loved this mate! Keep up the good work
A good short.
And your upvote counter is at 100%
I'm kind of torn between wanting to know what happened next and thinking that was an excellent place to end it.
But I enjoyed the story; very nice. :)
Awww. This story managed to put the ghost of a smile on my face.
Hrm
Really nice work here! Love the hints indicating what's going until the reveal.
Featured on episode 288 of my podcast, Pony 411.
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/213901/my-little-reviews-feedback/thread/438819/review-passing-feelings
Heres your
totally not latevery much on time review!(Seriously though, thanks for being patient lol)
Oh you git this was beautiful. Strong premise, strong finish, ;~;
That was sad, I didn't realize Rarity what was being hinted till the end, excellent.