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The following are true fictional accounts of possibly heinous crimes allegedly committed by pastel ponies. The following is rated T for sex, drugs, rock n roll, a little violence and some language that would probably make fluttershy cry. Read at your own discretion.

Magna Carta is a proud pegasus practitioner of law. He enjoys the finer things like coffee, comfy chairs, and arguing. He's a little young, and a bit inexperienced but that doesn't stop blind lady justice from throwing him some curve ball cases. These the stories of those cases.

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Unfortunately I'm busy at the moment. Marked as "read later". Will edit when done. I say all that to say this:



FIRST

1144675 You know you can get banned for 24 hours for doing that right?

Why is it people get so but hurt from saying, "FIRST," its fun to do.


By the way THIRD :twilightblush:

A bit, um, typo-ish, but an interesting and pretty funny read. Just get to the action soon!

It's slender- oh nvm, its just a suit, carry on!

btw


SIXTH :rainbowkiss:

"What the hay does that mean...?"

"I don't know anymore."

That pretty much sums up any conversation where something PInkie said comes up. :pinkiehappy:

Trixie! The green-eyed look doesn't suit you! First you're jealous of Twilight... which is understandable because she's an actual mage whilst you're just a lone, nomadic carnie, but now you're jealous of Rarity? Could it be that you feel... threatened? :raritywink:

Dat Plot, huh? What an interesting way to end a chapter. :facehoof: Keep up the good work, though. :twilightsmile:

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I happen to think Rarity's plot is VERY interesting:trollestia:

And thanks everypony... I mean it though, I like all this feed back, if there's any outrageous continuity or grammatical errors feel free to nit pick... Ok... Time to get to work:rainbowdetermined2:

Oh get over it, pal! You get your fee anyway, don't you? Even if it's just the pittance they pay public defenders!

I wanna know who was cheering on Big Mac. I mean... I know he's pretty much cut a swathe through the mares of Ponyville (including the Bearers of Harmony, which might ultimately turn out to be unhealthy) but who'd cheer him on in court? :rainbowkiss:

Brava. Brava ragazza.

You have a few grammar things to iron out

Rape, murder, Necromancy, insighting chaos, conspiracy to insight chaos,

Necromancy shouldn't be capitalized, and I think the word you're looking for is "inspire," not insight. (Unless seeing "chaos" in fortune telling is a criminal offense or something)

Other than that, you story doesn't have a bad start. Nice idea, seems original.

There comes a point where you try to make it too random... personally I think you crossed the line. Songfics are a no-no in my book.

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Thanks! I don't know if anyone has ever done something like this, and I was kinda sick of cheri-mac fics but still hungering for more cherilee sooo... I decided to write this...

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Well to be honest It was the one chapter. I don't believe in "too random", but agree i really have to get to the grit of the story, I have lots of ideas where to begin but I don't quite know which to lead with. The next chapter will change allot of this. I guess the song was my way of saying "farewell" to lighthearted drunkenness and pinky-pie mind rapes...

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