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Yeah, got nothing.

I was about to do a Fluttershy chapter too, but then a family situation developed that demanded all my attention, and I kinda had to drop everything for a while to deal, and even after I posted some more stuff, I heard nothing from them since that initial "I'm working on 'Shy now" I sent them.

I'm curious if this will actually end with him "winning" or if he'll face consequences

You know, considering Aloe and Lotus' irresponsibility AND the fact that Star clearly resisted but gave in, I wonder if perhaps the herb has an effect on stallions that makes their libido increase?

Either it's not true and perhaps Star can use it as a lie and get away with it, but at worst it's the truth and therefore Star isn't completely culpable here.

Also, just because of how odds work I highly doubt EVERYONE Star does this with will get pregnant from it. Personally, I'd throw a dart and see what one or two names it lands on and those are the ones that get pregnant.

with a story like this, I wouldn't be surprised if he gets away with this kind of expect it.

You just won me over. I saw this on the featured box and have literally been reading it since it was published, alt-tabbing and then I come back and see a Rainbow Dash chapter. You just got a very happy reader. Can't wait for the rest!

Now that there is a chapter dedicated to Rainbow Dash, I've re-added it to the group. In the future, don't add stories to groups they're not appropriate for. Even incomplete stories you intend to make fit later. It's better that way for the members of the group, it's better for you for advertising. Everyone wins.

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Only one way to find out!

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Yeah... Who knows which ones will actually end up pregnant? Star sure doesn’t!

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^.^ Glad this chapter is getting the approval of the Dashie fans!

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Oh... When it’s a story that’s fully written and just waiting to be posted, I usually throw it into every group that applies to the full story. Redoing groups after every chapter would be exhausting.

I'm questioning the hiring practices that would let a stallion give massages to mares in heat.

...This story sounds like it might be hot though.

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I try to justify it at least a little in the story. But yeah ... not a great decision on Aloe & Lotus’s part.

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But Star 'knew all about the heat treatment procedure' and the herbs involved. He is without a doubt culpable for his actions, making this full-on rape, especially given his command at the end. That he then repeats, and if the tags can be believed, he gets his friend in on it. The only thing saving him from castration and being sent to Tartarus will be some bullshit about Twilight and the rest of the mares falling in love with their rapist.

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some bullshit about Twilight and the rest of the mares falling in love with their rapist.

Not in this story!

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I'm sure you know who's reaction I'm most looking forward to.

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Yeah ... but unfortunately the story only really goes into the reaction of one victim.

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Now I'm slightly less excited for the rest of the story. Great Writing!

Why is there not a rape tag on this disgusting story? Because all I am seeing is some shitty immature colt screwing any mare he sees knowing full well they are absolutely not giving any consent to this. What an awful story.

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There is no rape tag. The tag you need to look for to avoid is non-con.... which this story has

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There’s just no winning with the tag nazis, is there? You got your non-con tag, and I used it ... and I still get complaints.

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I’ll never escape the tag police.

Music seems suspicious... Are the mares the only ones being made suggestible here?

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Just for ambiance ... probably.

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Ummmmmm are you blind😅😅

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There is. The fucking Non-Con tag is on there. Also why would you read the story when you don't like it? Just downvote and move on. No need to write a shitty comment and start a keyboard war in the comments.

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I like trolls such as yourself, always good for a giggle and little else

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Heh, well, at least feeding the troll generates lots of comments and keeps the fic at the top of the feature box.
Thanks, troll!

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That's what the "non-con" tag means, non consentual

I feel like a plot twist of they remembered and they want more is warranted since hypnosis can't make you do things that go against every instinct you have.

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Well, just because it doesn’t go against instinct doesn’t mean that it’s something they would have chosen to do if they were in their right minds...

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Imagine going into a story and not reading the tags, then bitching about the content. How stupid are you?

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I mean....thats reality. This is a fictional story set in a world that very much isn't our own and has shown mond control can make you go against who you are.

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Jeez, I dont think i've seen that many downvotes before.

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It’s quite an accomplishment, really.

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These stories in a nutshell:
Lie down
Fuck
Leave.

Epic control failure!

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Sombra: am I a joke to you?