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Draxonos135


Hello everyone, Draxonos135 here. I mostly focus on Equestria Girls fanfics, and the one thing I like to do most is bring some kind of positive emotion to my readers.

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The Dazzlings needed money, and since Sonata was too dumb and Aria was too lazy, it fell on Adagio's shoulders to keep a roof over her their heads.

This is just one of the many things she's done for money.

Written for the January prompt of Uncommon Dazzling Ship: Adagio X Fluttershy.

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What!? An uncommon pairing prompt!? Where is this!?

I'll also comment after I'm not working and can read the actual story, but this is more important to ask now!

A bit too short, you could probably expand on this.

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Prompt came from here.

As for the story, I'd agree with Boltstrike, I think this needed something more. Some of that's most likely a bias on my part, but to me the characterization and plot here felt simplistic to the point where it just doesn't leave much an impression on me? Sirens are down on their luck after losing their magic, Fluttershy does something kind to help them--as far as I can tell, that's about what there is to this, and I'd really liked to have seen more than just kind of a first meeting here.

Competent enough for what it is, though.

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The group Uncommon Dazzling Pairings. The prompt's on the main page.

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Well, I wanted to write something short and simple, so I guess I did good either way XD

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  • Insists learning group location is important :rainbowdetermined2:
  • Learns location :raritystarry:
  • Does not join group :rainbowhuh:

:trollestia:

Huk

Not bad. I like the attitude of both Fluttershy and especially Adagio - quite a refreshing approach :unsuresweetie:.

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